Re: a comment on A World At War by Damien	12-Jul-05/1:37 AM
I am completely confused.....Can I not express my feelings in any way I choose. If you get offended then so be it but I wrote this with the best intentions. Thanks for the feedback
Re: a comment on A World At War by Damien	11-Jul-05/2:49 AM
I used '*something* safely wallowing in safety' as to ephasize the safety of this *something*. I am not sure whether it made sense I just picked up the word wallowing and thought I would try and use it. Thanks for the feedback
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	23-Jun-05/3:04 AM
Thanks for the feedback Zodiac
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	23-Jun-05/3:02 AM
Thanks for the lectur I will bare it in mind...thanks for the feedback
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	23-Jun-05/3:01 AM
Thanks for the feedback
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	21-Jun-05/3:07 AM
Unfortunatley I dont understand mutual incomprehension... However I do understand this style is no good to attract fellow poets...I will work on some new styles or whatever and post a couple of new poems completely different from anything I have posted on this site.....bye critiques
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	21-Jun-05/3:03 AM
You fuckin idiot. The only reason I post poetry on this site is to get realistic view of my work in other peoples eyes.NOT to have people lie about it and make me feel good when really its shit. Maybe people who cant write poetry will appreciate it? We just dont know. Either way can you please say what you think is wrong with it instead of just stating its simply 'shit'. Also why would I be bothered about getting any feedback off this site at all when I get plenty from the 12 sites I post poetry to.
Re: a comment on Confused Love by Damien	20-Jun-05/1:48 AM
Then why did you comment??!
Re: a comment on Self Conscious by Damien	27-Apr-05/5:59 AM
I will bare this in mind as I plan my next poem. I truly believe this is some of the best advice I have been given on this site.
Re: a comment on Self Conscious by Damien	27-Apr-05/1:37 AM
You are right that my recent poetry is influenced by the critisism it will innevitably receive. But it is because I dwell on this whilst I write a new poem.
Re: a comment on Self Conscious by Damien	26-Apr-05/6:51 AM
Yes of course I did: you said you thought my poetry had gone down hill because of some reason or other, but how can that be when it is a single poem.It is impossible for all of my poetry to actually have a meaning let-a-lone make sense. I simply enjoy the flow of rhyming words and "hooks". If I choose to only develop this(not a suggestion) it is entirely up to me. Thanks for the feedback.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	26-Apr-05/1:26 AM
Wrong, that is not how I speak normally like I said. These playfull assumptions are getting everyones knickers in a twist. Here you go: lets be friends, I am sorry for any remark I made to offend whether true or false. A TRUCE.
Re: a comment on Self Conscious by Damien	26-Apr-05/1:09 AM
Will you please stop grabbing extracts from my poetry and some give a conclusion. I know you can offer me good advice, so please do.
Re: a comment on Self Conscious by Damien	26-Apr-05/1:08 AM
Is it really possible for every poem I produce to be my best quality, no because I have not reached that even when i am on top form.
Re: a comment on A greater purpose? by Damien	25-Apr-05/6:54 AM
Nice one Steve
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	25-Apr-05/1:12 AM
I only mentioned everyone makes assumptions INCLUDING me. I have no reason to argue back. I may come across hypocritical but thats because I am messing around at work (not an excuse) and I promise you this is not how I come across in conversation.
Re: a comment on Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien	22-Apr-05/7:19 AM
Huh, i'm to stupid to understand this context.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	22-Apr-05/5:33 AM
NEWSFLAH: you reply to every comment that I have replied to, are you so shallow you have to say something back. NEWSEXPLOSION: I am not here to offend anybody,when people offend me I am replying once but they are not giving up, who is holding this persistent negative attitude? err, you.
Re: a comment on Trying to get signed? by Damien	22-Apr-05/4:59 AM
I use this Ethusiastic language to motivate people at what they choose to do, its entirely up to me how I express myself (thank fuck).
Re: a comment on A new leaf by Damien	22-Apr-05/2:00 AM
Its a metephor for somwthing being over something else. "his thoughts towered my thoughts" "that building towers the landscape?" Is that satisfactory.