on Utensils of creation by Damien
12 Apr 2005, 2:50 AM
Just say what you fell and understand when you judge you are destroying nothing from me
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2005, 7:35 AM
Sorry I have never rated any of your poems I am just at work when I am on the net. Nice feel although not a dastic subject, plus how can I say anything bad to someone who has offered nothing but support. Keep up the good work and get in contact with me about publishing books as this is a dream of mine.
Love the style
Love the style
on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 Apr 2005, 2:49 AM
Very nice mouthfull, love the style, great talent and wonderfullllll subject.
on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom
18 Apr 2005, 3:18 AM
No real movement for me but it does represent what you can do with words.
on Wasted Words by ho_hum
19 Apr 2005, 4:56 AM
Nice poem. stop thinking........ and dont ........ also forget the...... next time leave.......out
on A new leaf by Damien
20 Apr 2005, 6:37 AM
Before the comments begin I can virtually gaurantee Goad and Zodiac will be here ready to Point my flaws out. So if you dont understand this poem its probably because it is not understandable?
Good luck Goad and Zodiac the critques of the future.
Good luck Goad and Zodiac the critques of the future.
on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
21 Apr 2005, 6:54 AM
Feels like something I would of wrote. I trulty feel the meaning, if only these other "critiques" could see that.
on some deleted poem
29 Apr 2005, 5:05 AM
Fucking great poem. Love the style and statements.