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A greater purpose? (Free verse) by Damien
Am I worthless, are my efforts not needed
Do I believe in everything I perceive?
Does this life have the purpose I hold within myself?
Or must this hell carry on leaving nothing on the shelf
So now you must see that my emotions are nothing-
As my focus with this intention will free something
But back to my dreams I wish to carry out
By dreams I mean the thing conceived without any doubtâ¦
I believe I must develop myself to prepare for this journey
I must earn it and practice things that truly are worth it
Then I must obtain the one thing humans crave
This currency of state that destroys this race
A new system will need to be in place as we breed together
But we must help each other and forget bad weather
If we see the truth that we can evolve before these eyes
A transformation of mass creation will be present in our minds
So the conclusion of all this//(stop) is I will personally live in bliss
And share my love with all I should to manifest a shift
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6331
Posted: April 22, 2005 5:02 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2005 5:02 AM PDT
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