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Dylan's Odyssey. (Free verse) by Don-Quixote
Like Dylan said Mr Candyman
sing a tune for me cause I'm jitter-janglin,
succumbing to some senseless primal desperation
that's risen from my hidden discontent--
Sooth me with that tangerine grin, cherry lips whistlin
some tune that accompanies the frenzied sway of my dreams,
and subtle in it's mission, easing the consequent tide
so it can tuck itself beneath the sands of my brainsky.
Like Dylan said Mr. Candyman, you're what the sirens sang
in claxoned seduction to brush aside a sailors worried thoughts
persuading him to resign to their melody's non-existent current
before embracing the jagged rocks of mortal cancellation.
Like Dylan said Mr. Candyman,
cause of you I heed not the skies monitory constellation.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6357
Posted: July 8, 2004 6:47 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2004 12:25 AM PDT
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Brainsky
Monitory
would make a nice ditty I think[sky].
btw:
Monitory, adjective - def: Serving to warn.