Re: In Due Time by DeadtotheWorld	14-Apr-05/1:30 PM
this is almost too weird but not quite
Re: Love Spoke by MistressSnow	6-Apr-05/9:55 AM
im not a fan of rhyming and lines 34 & 36 don't even rhyme..
Re: Bottleneck by Cha no Onna	3-Apr-05/11:12 AM
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Re: a comment on genious by the_poetess	2-Apr-05/12:13 PM
thankyou
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	2-Apr-05/12:10 PM
compltely agreed
Re: a comment on don't know by the_poetess	2-Apr-05/12:04 PM
i couldn't agree more
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	13-Mar-05/10:59 AM
thank you -emili
Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	9-Mar-05/4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it -emili
Re: a comment on don't know by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/4:21 PM
i dont eat at mcdonalds and i excersice and my job currently is being educated, so i am offered the luxary of not having to put bread on the table and i told you earlier, i often act pompous -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/4:19 PM
you make a good point, and i will keep that in mind thankyou for being able to criticize without being rude or negative....... -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/4:18 PM
i am having issues with our government as well.. canada, huh, i actually have family there, but i've never met them you have such a pretty name, just saying -emili
Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/3:09 PM
may i ask if you are generally an intuitive person, because id say you have guessed everything right interesting BUddha reference and especially the hw part, you are right i dont think i am a genius at least i dont think i do, but if you associate my arrogance with my sophmoric schooling, then i can remain confident that it will pass, this one was the most natural poem by far, in means of how it came out, and sometimes i speak but not as if I am myself, which may account for some arrogance in general i think my issue is that i feel like everybody everywhere is suffering but im not and its not fair to them and why arent i doing more for society; i have yet to find my balance give me time -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/3:04 PM
intersting.........do you think the end could stand on its own as its own poem,(the last three verses) or would you say that the first part is the only good part -emili
Re: a comment on don't know by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/3:03 PM
its vaguely disturbing that you find that funny but you know, you are right, no one will understand my pain, but they probably wont ever understand yours either, because we all have a pain that is different, and we only understand what has happened to us i think thats why so many people feel alone -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/3:01 PM
thankyou what country do you come from just wondering if you dont want to say that is fine and i do love america but i hate it to, is that strange or uniquely american (most of my friends agree) -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/2:59 PM
you know, you are probably very near the mark when you say that......i do have a habit of going to long and getting too detailed......but i think my point may be just an aim in the dark at the truth because thats all i was looking for when i rote this.......and you are correct again when you that i dont understand life............i havent lived nearly enough of it yet to have any real idea what im talking about, but i try and hope that when and if i ever do understand i will know enough to be able to share that with others............. -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/2:57 PM
you know i really fail to see the relevance between spelling and what expletives may be applied to me and you dont really know what your talking about which is sad because at the heart of communism is one of the best ideas ever come up with, mainly, that each person does what they can and gets what the need the problem is that as a human race, we are not pious, satisfied, or driven to do work when we dont have, myself and yourself included please think before you sound ignorant, i am sure you are not or you wouldnt be pursuing a poetry site anyway -emili
Re: a comment on genious by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/2:53 PM
you make a compelling point - that is something i am having trouble with - you could say i am a brain, you know, i live in my head to much, and often the details of the outer world just slip me by........im working on it though..........thankyou for being contructive without being rude -emili
Re: a comment on genious by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/2:52 PM
sometimes i dont like a piece of poetry but I dont feel like being rude --if i know is that i dont like it but i really have nothing constructive to say - is it not better to say nothing at all and i dont honestly think i am a genius, but we all have our delusional moments dont we, those times when you really think you are onto something, but then you wake up the next morning and realize not only has that theme been played out 1001 times over, but that you're also an ass at least ive had days like this, regardless - you were right in thinking that it did have a touch of arrogance - i was going for that - not because i really am one - because all of those "martyrs" that are wondering around today piss me off - who needs another martry one third of the world already has one, and the rest obviously dont need one -emili
Re: a comment on genious by the_poetess	9-Mar-05/2:48 PM
no actually, i am a gemini -emili