Re: The Chocolat Box by Samantha	7-Mar-05/7:26 PM
um this was weak at best, and only managed to work at all because it was supported by an outside quote - 5 -
Re: What went wrong with America? (An essay) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	7-Mar-05/7:28 PM
i couldnt even be bothered to read this - this site is for poetry not essay - 5 because it looks like you might have put effort in any way -emili
Re: Get Away by Miggy	7-Mar-05/7:30 PM
for some who sick of complaining you seem to whining alot - 3 - - emili
Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	9-Mar-05/4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it -emili
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Mar-05/4:36 PM
ah, but have you yet considered the chance that history man never see you, how many people have you heard from 18th century france, or 11th century africa exactly
Re: Bottleneck by Cha no Onna	3-Apr-05/11:12 AM
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Re: Love Spoke by MistressSnow	6-Apr-05/9:55 AM
im not a fan of rhyming and lines 34 & 36 don't even rhyme..
Re: In Due Time by DeadtotheWorld	14-Apr-05/1:30 PM
this is almost too weird but not quite