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Re: science by whispern_smoke_wisp 5-Aug-05/6:08 PM
hae any of you ever hugged a dog?
Re: a comment on science by whispern_smoke_wisp 11-Apr-05/3:20 PM
okay, i dont like to be rude, but im in a bad mood and you are being an idiot, okay,
when did i say that i believed the article mentioned in this poem ..... ?!?!? NEVER........and by the way....its a poem NOT an autobiography, did you actually read it, or what, okay, why would i SHAKE MY HEAD to something i agreed with


please try to not be this annoying
Re: a comment on science by whispern_smoke_wisp 10-Apr-05/5:53 PM
u totally missed the point of this 100%, all the way
Re: a comment on cacoon by whispern_smoke_wisp 3-Apr-05/12:25 PM
Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii 9-Mar-05/3:53 PM
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme
Re: with no words to write by nentwined 9-Mar-05/3:52 PM
i really really like this!
Re: Nitro by NNirvana13666 9-Mar-05/3:49 PM
a tad to cliche to be really good
Re: Some Things by Christof 9-Mar-05/3:44 PM
i like this i do - but one comment - be more specific when you say she - it was a little confusing at times as to whether you were discussing the librarian or the girl.......

Re: Revolution by Nitroxide 9-Mar-05/3:43 PM
i like the intention but, i dont think we will ever have a Utopia, at least not one this earth, things can get better but they wont change, until people do

and people haven't changed that much at all since the time of the grecians,

thats 2000+ years of human nature working against you

it would be nice though (the utopia)
Re: Infatuation by noonewantstobealone 9-Mar-05/3:38 PM
1) if it is on a site called why would you post that which is not a poem

2) it definetly sounds like a poetic attempt, I'm not quite sure how well you suceeded by it sounds like a poem to me

3) it was a good effort and I will acknowledge that so often the words to describe what we feel escape us and we almost always come up short in trying to describe both the happy and the poignant

4) all that aside i don't really care for this that much i give it a 6

Re: a comment on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp 7-Mar-05/4:23 PM
thanks :)
Re: a comment on The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp 6-Mar-05/4:18 PM
thanks - im not so good at spelling (i should probably work on that)
Re: a comment on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp 6-Mar-05/4:15 PM
Re: a comment on A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp 6-Mar-05/12:00 PM
thank you so much! i guess this means I have suceeded then(as a poet) if i've made a reader happy!
Re: Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5-Mar-05/9:49 AM
i agree with crooked_smile
Re: What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 5-Mar-05/9:48 AM
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle

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