Re: Brother's Egg Book by Jeremi B. Handrinos	20-Feb-05/12:26 PM
I don't understand the second line, and scribbles/quibbles might be a bit forced, but I like this poem, especially "Piling things around Me, in squares, and Suspensions."
Re: Get in Line by MacFrantic	20-Feb-05/1:25 PM
A bit vague, but i like the ending
Re: So I Hear by Vince Dolamando	25-Feb-05/10:04 PM
That poem was rather amusing. Especially the part abi=out the "RU-CUS". Funny enough for a 1.
Re: Untitled by MacFrantic	25-Feb-05/10:12 PM
the feet are inconsistent. good effort, maybe just rework it a bit.
Re: My Wish by Fire_is_cool	25-Feb-05/10:19 PM
You have out-cliched cliche. Well done. Sorry if that came across as being insensitive.
Re: Midnight Chimes by TLRufener	25-Feb-05/10:22 PM
This reminds me of "one two, buckle my shoe; three, four, shut the door...etc". Except I enjoy that poem. 2
Re: Acrostic Terza Rima by Bhaskaryya	25-Feb-05/10:34 PM
creative. not terribly meaningful, but the form has some limitations that I must take into account. 7 sounds about right.
Re: Panda Love by Semper Phildelis	22-Apr-05/10:12 AM
this is kind of funny. i think "bang" is kind of harsh. i want to like the male panda, and that means he should be more sensitive to her needs. why odesnt he bring her a bouquet of bamboo shoots or something? (5)
Re: Butterfly Plague by zodiac	23-Apr-05/5:40 PM
i like the imagery of moth wings beating against a window.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-05/1:00 AM
i love the ending 10
Re: Pandemic’s Here Again by Lenore	12-Jul-05/12:10 AM
WHO knows is a clever line. 6
Re: Almost Persuaded by Dovina	12-Jul-05/12:19 AM
I am curious- what is the knowledge we are drooling for? Apart from this, The poem reminds me a bit of a scene from charlie and the chocolate factory, i believe its the scene on the boat. lucky for you, i like that movie, so ill give it a 5.