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Get in Line (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Hi, my name is A-173
For a dollar I can be richer
But in debt I will cease to exist
Pity my relativity
Because I am next in line
Just as the fools behind me
And just as well off in front
I am not yet certain
That this queue is a circle
Ending only where it begins
Yet
We never move
So the sun doesn't either
Unless we direct it
With conversation
And anyone can leave
At any time they feel
Though the velvet rope
boundaries are discouraging
If the line were to end
If the boundary was broken
I would not know where to go
So take a number
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7756
Posted: September 18, 2004 11:01 PM PDT; Last modified: February 19, 2005 1:23 AM PST
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