| Re: Me and She. by peach835 |
22-Oct-02/11:48 AM |
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Eee. I hope this is meant to be a joke. Line eleven doesn't rhyme. And what's 'sinse'?
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| Re: Emptiness by Jagang |
22-Oct-02/11:55 AM |
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If you slash your wrist, you generally die, unless you are treated. You are alive. Ergo, you did not slash your wrist. Or if you did, you didn't really mean it. Ergo, you are a whiny bastard.
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| Re: Your Mama by jessicazee |
22-Oct-02/11:55 AM |
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The last stanza is terrible. the first two funny.
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22-Oct-02/12:20 PM |
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| Re: Tiger by Flattop |
22-Oct-02/12:44 PM |
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You're just a bore, I'm afraid.
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22-Oct-02/12:46 PM |
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I like the first stanza enough, but the last two leave quite quite indifferent. Sorry.
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22-Oct-02/1:28 PM |
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So cliched, -=Dark_Angel=-... You're starting to let me down. Since 'Childe of my Buttocks', you really haven't been up to standard. I'm dissapointed in you.
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22-Oct-02/6:14 PM |
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What the bloody hell is 'deafing' supposed to be?
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| Re: futile existence by chinstrap |
23-Oct-02/6:12 AM |
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-=Dark_Angel=- may like it, but all in all, he's much better at it than you are.
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| Re: Our New Tongue by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:20 AM |
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'The husk of your voice' is wonderful. I rather like this.
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| Re: The Astronomer's Lament by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:25 AM |
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You get many points for using light-years correctly. And more because it's good.
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| Re: Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:29 AM |
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This is rather amusing. I hope that's not a bad comment.
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| Re: Transfixed (#2) by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:31 AM |
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'A broken spine of cloud' is genius. Sheer.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:33 AM |
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The fact that it actually sounds like a set of instructions makes it gain a lot. Quite wondrous. Cheers.
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
23-Oct-02/6:49 AM |
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Cromwell was a great socialist. He's the only person in history to manage to get the English, Scots and Irish to agree on something and work together. Unfortunately for him, that thing was hatred of Cromwell. Oh well, you can't have everything, I guess.
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| Re: Lucky Me by savannah |
23-Oct-02/6:52 AM |
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The title is abominable. Quite. It sets us up for a nice little comedy, and instead we get this. Pah.
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| Re: Thunder by Normo |
23-Oct-02/7:04 AM |
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23-Oct-02/11:20 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Oct-02/11:21 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Oct-02/11:21 AM |
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That's not much of a revelation.
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