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Free verse № 15392

Lucky Me

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Your lips speak soft sweetness, Your touch a cool caress, I am lost in your magic, Its like my heart beats within your chest, I think of you each morning, And dream of you each night, I think of your arms being around me, And cannot express my delight, You???re always in my heart, Even when we are far apart, My love for you is like a song, It shall go on forever for so long.

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4 comments

[9] Artificial_Sweetner 16-Sep-02/3:11 PM Reply
Aww that is really sweet! i like that one it has good rythm and meanig
[6] Amelia 16-Sep-02/6:32 PM Reply
Ah, L'amour...
[n/a] ==Doylum › Amelia 16-Sep-02/6:40 PM Reply
what happened to cast Amalea? i didn't get to read it
[1] Tintagiles 23-Oct-02/6:52 AM Reply
The title is abominable. Quite. It sets us up for a nice little comedy, and instead we get this. Pah.