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Lucky Me (Free verse) by savannah
Your lips speak soft sweetness, Your touch a cool caress, I am lost in your magic, Its like my heart beats within your chest, I think of you each morning, And dream of you each night, I think of your arms being around me, And cannot express my delight, You???re always in my heart, Even when we are far apart, My love for you is like a song, It shall go on forever for so long.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4444447
Weighted score: 5.2222223
Overall Rank: 4322
Posted: September 16, 2002 2:34 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 2:34 PM PDT
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[9] Artificial_Sweetner @ 62.7.8.154 | 16-Sep-02/3:11 PM | Reply
Aww that is really sweet! i like that one it has good rythm and meanig
[6] Amelia @ 198.146.140.2 | 16-Sep-02/6:32 PM | Reply
Ah, L'amour...
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 213.1.189.220 > Amelia | 16-Sep-02/6:40 PM | Reply
what happened to cast Amalea? i didn't get to read it
[1] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.100 | 23-Oct-02/6:52 AM | Reply
The title is abominable. Quite. It sets us up for a nice little comedy, and instead we get this. Pah.
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