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Lucky Me (Free verse) by savannah

Your lips speak soft sweetness, Your touch a cool caress, I am lost in your magic, Its like my heart beats within your chest, I think of you each morning, And dream of you each night, I think of your arms being around me, And cannot express my delight, You???re always in my heart, Even when we are far apart, My love for you is like a song, It shall go on forever for so long.

Tintagiles 23-Oct-02/6:52 AM
The title is abominable. Quite. It sets us up for a nice little comedy, and instead we get this. Pah.




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