on The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8
8 Dec 2004, 4:33 AM
Finally ending in the the ABC's of Divorce.
on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart
8 Dec 2004, 5:18 AM
My own version of: MUSIC SWIMS BACK TO ME
By: Anne Sexton.
By: Anne Sexton.
on Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer
8 Dec 2004, 7:26 AM
Aahh I'm going through this right now:
Believes HE can seduce me with a dance
Clings to me and purrs and ultimately fails.
To put it bluntly it this poem was a car your transmission just slipped.
Overall I thought this poem was lacking in rhythm.
Believes HE can seduce me with a dance
Clings to me and purrs and ultimately fails.
To put it bluntly it this poem was a car your transmission just slipped.
Overall I thought this poem was lacking in rhythm.
on My Life As a Single Teenage Girl by Princess_Snowflake
13 Dec 2004, 9:32 AM
This is not a Haiku
A haiku has 5,7,5 and is about nature
Say the count was right then it would be a Senriu, those are about humans.
A haiku has 5,7,5 and is about nature
Say the count was right then it would be a Senriu, those are about humans.
on Hurt by Princess_Snowflake
13 Dec 2004, 9:36 AM
You have to many mistakes in here. The rhyme is off. Alot of your sentances don't make sence.
Example:
that has caught your own eye
and makes you think
it's better than it was.
that has cought your eye
etc etc...Reread this poem and fix the mistakes.
Example:
that has caught your own eye
and makes you think
it's better than it was.
that has cought your eye
etc etc...Reread this poem and fix the mistakes.
on Happy by Acid_moose
3 Jan 2005, 11:05 AM
This reminded me of Gacy. With the whole Killing Kids and being a clown thing. I liked it!
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2005, 12:45 PM
I really like the concept of this poem
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2005, 1:25 PM
i thought this was a really funny poem :) good job