Re: The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8	8-Dec-04/4:33 AM
Finally ending in the the ABC's of Divorce.
Re: Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart	8-Dec-04/5:18 AM
My own version of: MUSIC SWIMS BACK TO ME By: Anne Sexton.
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	8-Dec-04/7:26 AM
Aahh I'm going through this right now: Believes HE can seduce me with a dance Clings to me and purrs and ultimately fails. To put it bluntly it this poem was a car your transmission just slipped. Overall I thought this poem was lacking in rhythm.
Re: My Life As a Single Teenage Girl by Princess_Snowflake	13-Dec-04/9:32 AM
This is not a Haiku A haiku has 5,7,5 and is about nature Say the count was right then it would be a Senriu, those are about humans.
Re: Hurt by Princess_Snowflake	13-Dec-04/9:36 AM
You have to many mistakes in here. The rhyme is off. Alot of your sentances don't make sence. Example: that has caught your own eye and makes you think it's better than it was. that has cought your eye etc etc...Reread this poem and fix the mistakes.
Re: A smile by Bobjim	16-Dec-04/1:15 PM
Reminds me of a poem I wrote in the second grade... It has no imagination once so ever.
Re: Reality by blacksoul	16-Dec-04/1:58 PM
what in god's name is this? Not a Haiku!
Re: Happy by Acid_moose	3-Jan-05/11:05 AM
This reminded me of Gacy. With the whole Killing Kids and being a clown thing. I liked it!
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jan-05/12:45 PM
I really like the concept of this poem
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jan-05/1:25 PM
i thought this was a really funny poem :) good job