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Hurt (Lyric) by Princess_Snowflake
I thought we were friends
I thought you wanted me so badly
until you found something
that has caught your own eye
and makes you think
it's better than it was.
After when the sun rose
I saw you with such good happiness
and talking to me with respect
that made me think you meant it
until I saw you
with an expression of pure anger
and saying the words
of hate, disrespect, and pain.
When my ears were in front of your mouth
my heart has sank with horror, anger, and sadness
which describes
that I'm hurt
and filled with tears
in my dark, clear eyes.
I may be your friend
but you are not the friend
that would hurt me and my feelings
with your dirty words
that can easily sabotage me.
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Posted: December 9, 2004 5:27 PM PST; Last modified: December 9, 2004 5:27 PM PST
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Example:
that has caught your own eye
and makes you think
it's better than it was.
that has cought your eye
etc etc...Reread this poem and fix the mistakes.