| Re: My first Haiku by DJCopasetic |
7-Mar-06/10:53 AM |
Simple, yet funny.
I like it.
=)
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| Re: II by D. $ Fontera |
7-Mar-06/10:52 AM |
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| Re: ~Tildoe~ by Thom |
7-Mar-06/10:51 AM |
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| Re: Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim |
7-Mar-06/10:48 AM |
I love each one of these. Excellent work. A+.
10/10!
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| Re: 0 by MacFrantic |
7-Mar-06/10:47 AM |
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made me chuckle... its ok. 7.
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| Re: Exsqueeze Me? Baking Powder? by Yardbird |
7-Mar-06/10:46 AM |
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| Re: Spam by Blade |
7-Mar-06/10:45 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Ocean by Fayt |
7-Mar-06/9:57 AM |
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The change i made may make you like it better; let me know.
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| Re: a comment on The Ocean by Fayt |
7-Mar-06/9:56 AM |
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i changed it up a bit and didnt realise that i added a extra syllable, i fixed it up.
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| Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi |
6-Mar-06/10:42 AM |
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| Re: my girl's day [tri-ku] by lmp |
6-Mar-06/10:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Ocean by Fayt |
6-Mar-06/9:58 AM |
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and i like it better without the possessive as well now that you mention it, ill take that out as well.
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| Re: a comment on The Ocean by Fayt |
6-Mar-06/9:57 AM |
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Your right, i just wrote it and posted it before i walked out of my last class. I didnt take the time to edit it, ill do it now.
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| Re: a comment on Together they Fell by Fayt |
2-Mar-06/11:00 AM |
Thank you for your comment.
I wrote up the prose form and it generally seems well liked here and other places. Tell me what you think. =]
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| Re: Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel |
28-Feb-06/10:26 AM |
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| Re: Together They Fell (Prose) by Fayt |
28-Feb-06/10:20 AM |
Note:
I havent proofread this very well yet so there may be a few flaws here and there, bear with me and ill get it completley updated soon.
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| Re: a comment on Together they Fell by Fayt |
28-Feb-06/10:15 AM |
did what you asked for..
tell me what you think. :)
its a first attempt so im looking forward to the critiscisms.
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| Re: a comment on Matters of the Heart by Fayt |
23-Feb-06/9:50 AM |
i thought this poem was WAYYYY too repetitive...
i dont like it all that much..
but i figured id post it anyway.
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| Re: She Doesn't Love Me. by edgar-allen-poe-rox |
17-Feb-06/8:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Together they Fell by Fayt |
16-Feb-06/11:08 AM |
Thank you very much for the tip.
You are completely right about the imagery used, rereading it I actually find it hard to believe i used "huge pole".
I will change it for any future uses.
Much Thanks.
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