poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Fayt (21-40) and replies

Comments byFayt, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on My first Haiku by DJCopasetic 7 Mar 2006, 10:53 AM
Simple, yet funny.

I like it.

=)
on II by D. $ Fontera 7 Mar 2006, 10:52 AM
Very Nice.
on ~Tildoe~ by Thom 7 Mar 2006, 10:51 AM
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on Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim 7 Mar 2006, 10:48 AM
I love each one of these. Excellent work. A+.

10/10!
on 0 by MacFrantic 7 Mar 2006, 10:47 AM
made me chuckle... its ok. 7.
on Exsqueeze Me? Baking Powder? by Yardbird 7 Mar 2006, 10:46 AM
wow, funny...





zero...
on Spam by Blade 7 Mar 2006, 10:45 AM
wtf..
replying on The Ocean by Fayt 7 Mar 2006, 9:57 AM
The change i made may make you like it better; let me know.
replying on The Ocean by Fayt 7 Mar 2006, 9:56 AM
i changed it up a bit and didnt realise that i added a extra syllable, i fixed it up.
on Existential questions by kawakurdi 6 Mar 2006, 10:42 AM
o so true...
on my girl's day [tri-ku] by lmp 6 Mar 2006, 10:39 AM
pleasent to read.
replying on The Ocean by Fayt 6 Mar 2006, 9:58 AM
and i like it better without the possessive as well now that you mention it, ill take that out as well.
replying on The Ocean by Fayt 6 Mar 2006, 9:57 AM
Your right, i just wrote it and posted it before i walked out of my last class. I didnt take the time to edit it, ill do it now.
replying on Together they Fell by Fayt 2 Mar 2006, 11:00 AM
Thank you for your comment.

I wrote up the prose form and it generally seems well liked here and other places. Tell me what you think. =]
on Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel 28 Feb 2006, 10:26 AM
I like it. ^_^
on Together They Fell (Prose) by Fayt 28 Feb 2006, 10:20 AM
Note:

I havent proofread this very well yet so there may be a few flaws here and there, bear with me and ill get it completley updated soon.
replying on Together they Fell by Fayt 28 Feb 2006, 10:15 AM
did what you asked for..

tell me what you think. :)

its a first attempt so im looking forward to the critiscisms.
replying on Matters of the Heart by Fayt 23 Feb 2006, 9:50 AM
i thought this poem was WAYYYY too repetitive...

i dont like it all that much..

but i figured id post it anyway.
on She Doesn't Love Me. by edgar-allen-poe-rox 17 Feb 2006, 8:39 AM
i absolutely love it. =D
replying on Together they Fell by Fayt 16 Feb 2006, 11:08 AM
Thank you very much for the tip.

You are completely right about the imagery used, rereading it I actually find it hard to believe i used "huge pole".

I will change it for any future uses.

Much Thanks.