| Re: Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus |
28-Aug-05/6:10 PM |
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wtf is up w/ the low ratings... i think this is a excellent piece of writing.
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| Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt |
13-May-05/9:06 PM |
Well thank you for explaining yourself a little better. Now i can understand your critizism.
and thanks for the encouragement. ;)
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| Re: a comment on Go now if you want it. by Fayt |
11-May-05/3:49 AM |
lol, but yeah i can see what you are saying with my other poem.
I personally like the focus on one word, but, i can see it might be a good idea to take focus off a particular word.
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| Re: a comment on Blinking by zodiac |
10-May-05/10:16 AM |
i have to agree.
it is quite good till the end.
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| Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt |
10-May-05/10:09 AM |
1) i was testing out the features because im new here, i made this username about 6 months ago but never really used it, so i was seeing how it worked.
2)What do u mean by that?
3)I take that as a insult, i dont write poetry as a means to amuse others but as a means to vent my thoughts. Seeing as i was curious as of what others thought of it i posted it here; so don't criticize me by saying i am silly and others do it better.
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| Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt |
10-May-05/10:04 AM |
Not particularly.
It is very hard to explain...
Growing up i have always wondered if there was a pre-set fate for all of us to follow, and whether humans as a whole are good or evil, this is a representation of my thoughts gathered in a poem. That may sound confusing, but to me it makes sense in my mind.
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| Re: a comment on Strings by Fayt |
10-May-05/9:57 AM |
???
This is the only username i have ever used.
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| Re: a comment on Go now if you want it. by Fayt |
10-May-05/9:53 AM |
what improvements do u have in mind?
What words do u suggest?
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| Re: a comment on Fate by Fayt |
10-May-05/9:50 AM |
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gd observation, i wrote this quickly and didnt realise, id change it but it has to be completely reset... :(
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| Re: Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus |
10-Nov-04/7:36 PM |
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i really like this one, nice job.
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| Re: i`m tired by shazpen |
10-Nov-04/7:34 PM |
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