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28-Jul-04/9:18 PM |
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nb -- definitely works best if read aloud
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29-Jul-04/8:42 PM |
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you kidding? last line + 'five course dinner' is linchpin (see title)
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29-Jul-04/8:53 PM |
Kerry... what is he, some kind of politican?
9 for chutzpah
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| Re: The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus |
29-Jul-04/8:56 PM |
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| Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit |
29-Jul-04/9:02 PM |
my preferred translation of your luscious title is 'death melts everything' (6 years of Latin not for nothing)... if only this were a poem about microwaves.
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31-Jul-04/12:53 PM |
correctly ascertained dovina!
when you spell it out under the hot lights of stilted prose, self-indulgent sadness loses its appeal, becoming this grotesque monstrosity of a poem. much better to be happy. (though the people who sell us pop music would not have it that way...)
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31-Jul-04/12:56 PM |
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| Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62 |
31-Jul-04/1:25 PM |
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quickly, get her back--before you have to write any more poems like these
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| Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62 |
31-Jul-04/1:26 PM |
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oh wait, it's a guy. same deal!
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| Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62 |
31-Jul-04/1:39 PM |
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please peter-- take her back!
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| Re: Consolation by Dovina |
2-Aug-04/12:14 PM |
is he dead, in the ground -- and she has to dig him up?
a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.
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2-Aug-04/8:13 PM |
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wow. care for a cigarette?
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
2-Aug-04/8:16 PM |
truly, you are the devil.
what about gluttony?
brutal and swift -- like the Horsemen. like it
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
2-Aug-04/8:17 PM |
you sir, are the devil.
what about gluttony?
swift and brutal -- like the horsemen - 8 -
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| Re: St. Patrickâs Cathedral by Dovina |
27-Aug-04/12:03 AM |
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27-Aug-04/12:04 AM |
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you damn fool. nice poem.
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| Re: End by Dovina |
6-Sep-04/5:08 PM |
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6-Sep-04/5:10 PM |
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how I wish we all could say it
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| Re: Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali |
12-Sep-04/6:10 PM |
more than just a friendly game of twister -9-
but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
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12-Sep-04/6:13 PM |
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smile-inducing. I would cut out the "I'm sure" in the last line though. -9-
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