| Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom |
11-Jul-04/7:30 PM |
the opposite of wisdom is also wisdom
the rubbish tin glimmers if the lighting is right
the underground rails will take us from the night
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| Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom |
11-Jul-04/7:33 PM |
ps
I'd like it better without the "!"
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Jul-04/5:53 AM |
i like it
except you misspelled QUIDDITCH
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| Re: swallow it by anonandonandon |
14-Jul-04/9:45 PM |
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a darn sight better than voicing her swallows
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jul-04/1:10 PM |
the "spoil it" line spoiled it for you?
:-) appropriate
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jul-04/1:14 PM |
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the line breaks are a bit arbitrary-- but i think it helps in reading aloud (or under your breath). at least for me; i wrote it how i would talk it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Jul-04/10:24 AM |
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