poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dovina (21-40) and replies

Comments byDovina, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Sunrise at McDonalds by Dovina 4 Dec 2020, 6:22 PM
Yeah, it lacks lyric
jerks like story
not fiction, but events
no way to write poetry
just hit 'em in the nose
replying on I'll start by nentwined 2 Dec 2020, 11:09 AM
Thank you, I believe it is fixed.

Now, if only if only a tweak of their software would awaken the sleepers.
replying on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent 29 Nov 2020, 12:25 PM
I too have wished, and hoped that my returning to the empty room might draw some wayfarers. Thanks for showing up.
replying on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent 19 Nov 2020, 12:26 PM
We had something to say. Captive poets always do. But we say it where we have an audience -- poetry readings, facebook, zoom meetings, etc.

But nowhere on the internet is a better site for comments than here. What Nentwined engineered many years ago still supersedes any other interactive exchange of poetic commentary. Tell me if I am wrong.
on Due by impert&ent 19 Nov 2020, 12:03 PM
I find the form confusing.
on I'll start by nentwined 19 Nov 2020, 12:01 PM
adding comments always goes to the error box. Please fix this.
on I'll start by nentwined 19 Nov 2020, 11:59 AM
grasping at what might become
some future might have been—

great lines of hope and practical too.
on Where are all the poets? by nentwined 19 Nov 2020, 11:57 AM
Where have all the flowers gone, long time passing? They have not gone, for they cannot escape. They are somewhere, but not here. Come back, you poets. Comprised of glyphs with radiance, Come get your kudos.
on Lovesick by impert&ent 19 Nov 2020, 11:48 AM
I know something of. But not all of. It's why I never criticize you.
replying on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub 13 Jun 2020, 7:03 PM
Yes, it seems they have. The loom has spiderwebs. weavers gone. I returned like a ghost.
replying on Everybody's Gone by impert&ent 13 Jun 2020, 6:58 PM
I went away a few years ago, left the lonesome highway. The ghost ship is still here thanks to nentwined.

Put up a new poem, I'll give it a gander.
on time and clocks by nentwined 28 Apr 2020, 5:38 PM
I see a room of nerds caring about time for its changeable amounts and definitions. Across the hall nobody cares. Except the one who wrote that thoughtful graffiti, then painted over it.
replying on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp 23 Apr 2020, 4:19 PM
But then you couldn't even say that. You really need to reconsider.
replying on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp 23 Apr 2020, 4:12 PM
Oh I'd rather have him stay a while.
replying on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp 23 Apr 2020, 3:36 PM
2.5 years ago, what might anyone have meant or believed, even
the doctrine that material stuff has consciousness.
on Birb by Aetius 23 Apr 2020, 3:22 PM
How do you know what he was wondering?
He wondered at the window--that's reasonable
I often wonder at the window
replying on Year of the Cucumber by Dovina 23 Apr 2020, 3:20 PM
Wallah is an Arabic word similar to the French Voila.
cucumber - food - food for thought.
replying on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23 Apr 2020, 2:31 PM
On second thought read is as Scripture.
on Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta 23 Apr 2020, 2:14 PM
Hey Mandy What's up?
on Cannikin by Caducus 21 Apr 2020, 10:57 AM
Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.