| Re: a comment on Sunrise at McDonalds by Dovina |
4-Dec-20/6:22 PM |
Yeah, it lacks lyric
jerks like story
not fiction, but events
no way to write poetry
just hit 'em in the nose
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| Re: a comment on I'll start by nentwined |
2-Dec-20/11:09 AM |
Thank you, I believe it is fixed.
Now, if only if only a tweak of their software would awaken the sleepers.
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| Re: a comment on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent |
29-Nov-20/12:25 PM |
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I too have wished, and hoped that my returning to the empty room might draw some wayfarers. Thanks for showing up.
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| Re: a comment on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent |
19-Nov-20/12:26 PM |
We had something to say. Captive poets always do. But we say it where we have an audience -- poetry readings, facebook, zoom meetings, etc.
But nowhere on the internet is a better site for comments than here. What Nentwined engineered many years ago still supersedes any other interactive exchange of poetic commentary. Tell me if I am wrong.
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| Re: Due by impert&ent |
19-Nov-20/12:03 PM |
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I find the form confusing.
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| Re: I'll start by nentwined |
19-Nov-20/12:01 PM |
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adding comments always goes to the error box. Please fix this.
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| Re: I'll start by nentwined |
19-Nov-20/11:59 AM |
grasping at what might become
some future might have been—
great lines of hope and practical too.
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| Re: Where are all the poets? by nentwined |
19-Nov-20/11:57 AM |
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Where have all the flowers gone, long time passing? They have not gone, for they cannot escape. They are somewhere, but not here. Come back, you poets. Comprised of glyphs with radiance, Come get your kudos.
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| Re: Lovesick by impert&ent |
19-Nov-20/11:48 AM |
I know something of. But not all of. It's why I never criticize you.
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| Re: a comment on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub |
13-Jun-20/7:03 PM |
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Yes, it seems they have. The loom has spiderwebs. weavers gone. I returned like a ghost.
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| Re: a comment on Everybody's Gone by impert&ent |
13-Jun-20/6:58 PM |
I went away a few years ago, left the lonesome highway. The ghost ship is still here thanks to nentwined.
Put up a new poem, I'll give it a gander.
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| Re: time and clocks by nentwined |
28-Apr-20/5:38 PM |
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I see a room of nerds caring about time for its changeable amounts and definitions. Across the hall nobody cares. Except the one who wrote that thoughtful graffiti, then painted over it.
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| Re: a comment on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp |
23-Apr-20/4:19 PM |
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But then you couldn't even say that. You really need to reconsider.
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| Re: a comment on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp |
23-Apr-20/4:12 PM |
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Oh I'd rather have him stay a while.
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| Re: a comment on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp |
23-Apr-20/3:36 PM |
2.5 years ago, what might anyone have meant or believed, even
the doctrine that material stuff has consciousness.
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| Re: Birb by Aetius |
23-Apr-20/3:22 PM |
How do you know what he was wondering?
He wondered at the window--that's reasonable
I often wonder at the window
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| Re: a comment on Year of the Cucumber by Dovina |
23-Apr-20/3:20 PM |
Wallah is an Arabic word similar to the French Voila.
cucumber - food - food for thought.
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| Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Apr-20/2:31 PM |
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On second thought read is as Scripture.
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| Re: Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta |
23-Apr-20/2:14 PM |
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| Re: Cannikin by Caducus |
21-Apr-20/10:57 AM |
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Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.
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