Re: Silent by TLRufener	29-Sep-04/3:00 PM
Good Imagery
Re: Won't Be Dreaming (co-writer John K) by capachijim	29-Sep-04/2:53 PM
One of the better things I have read on here, well done!
Re: Society by QuirkyWonder	16-Aug-04/4:30 PM
Another very nice one!
Re: Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik	12-Aug-04/12:16 AM
I like the repition at the end, adds power. A little choppy, but overall a very nice concept. Stanza 4 is a tad confusing if you were looking for a revision place I might go there. Overall, I like it!
Re: a comment on Secret Password by freelancejoker	11-Aug-04/5:44 PM
I would be interested in knowing if this was the intent of the piece... and if it was, are there any allusions I am missing besides the ending?
Re: To you by freelancejoker	11-Aug-04/5:44 PM
Very descriptive. I love it. Good luck in your endeavors, we all need it.
Re: Myself by QuirkyWonder	11-Aug-04/11:43 AM
I really like your style
Re: Concussion + Broken Hearts= bad week by New Life Drug	9-Aug-04/1:47 PM
Well written! The metaphors bouncing back and forth are really powerful.
Re: A Letter to You by QuirkyWonder	9-Aug-04/1:38 PM
Excellent Poem, captures lots of emotion in a seemingly harmless context. Well done.