poemranker ::20 most recent comments by caitydee

Comments bycaitydee, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 25 May 2004, 8:16 PM
Perfect
on some deleted poem 26 May 2004, 9:14 AM
Its amazing how the feeling of being "enough" or the desire to be enough can be totally consuming, I like the first half of this and I feel like you have read my mind of some of these, but skip the last line, I want you to yell this at him not ask for him to mold you into what he wants!
on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee 26 May 2004, 4:00 PM
What on EARTH are you talking about?? Again, its not my baby, please leave a comment on the poem, save your ranting for your own, thanks!
on loneliness untold by francis nor capule 26 May 2004, 8:09 PM
well if its a break up poem, its a good one. From one break-up survivor to another, I love this.
on Get it straight by tre 27 May 2004, 8:49 PM
I really like this hun :)
on some deleted poem 27 May 2004, 8:51 PM
I realy love the idea of cleaning up the past and renewing past pain in the present. Excellent.
on Even manic dreamers must face Atropos by SupremeDreamer 18 Jun 2004, 9:45 PM
Very well done, I like the repition, yet its not overdone so it still flows, it just makes sense, I really like this one.
on Isn't it a wonder by caitydee 10 Jun 2004, 11:31 AM
god'swife-How can you give me a zero and not leave a comment?
on some deleted poem 17 May 2004, 8:50 PM
I love the first two stanzas, something everyone can relate to.
on some deleted poem 17 May 2004, 9:05 PM
I agree with Shin Shuu. This was well done, could probably be tweaked a bit, but well done.
on Sunrise by Katrina 17 May 2004, 9:21 PM
Some parts of this were cliche, but its so true, isn't it funny how life works like that, and I know I could have written the same thing, so I can't fault you for that! Regardless, I love this, good job.
on What's The Point? by Phalkon 17 May 2004, 9:32 PM
Well that attitue will get you no where! But I do sympathize. A bit whinny, but I am not one to judge! Not bad.
on Wanting To Much by Katrina 17 May 2004, 9:41 PM
Do you mean for the title to be "Wanting TOO Much"? Some spelling errors, sorry to be nit picky. I think you can cut some stuff out, a bit repetitive, a standard poem on lost love, what makes this special or stand out? I think you could make this really good, you have plenty to work with. Nice start. Bob, can you read my poems when you are in the mood to give all 10's?!! :) Thanks!
on some deleted poem 17 May 2004, 10:57 PM
I love this. The first two lines of the bridge maybe could use some work, but when put to music it probably wouldn't bother me. Regardless, I love it.
on Let Me Swing by caitydee 20 May 2004, 10:36 PM
This is a work in progress-but I wanted some feedback, thanks!
on Know Me by caitydee 29 May 2004, 8:06 PM
no comments??
on some deleted poem 31 May 2004, 9:10 PM
The title alone is enough to make me love this!
on some deleted poem 1 Jun 2004, 10:59 AM
I was disappointed to see that you had deleted all your poems. I enoyed reading them hun.
on Vibrissae by ggawrysi 1 Jun 2004, 11:00 AM
Oh I'm sure you could train hamsters. Maybe you should write a poem about scottish midgets, or Irish midgets, could be interesting.
on Garden of Monuments by RevHydra 1 Jun 2004, 11:18 PM
English translation?