regarding some deleted poem...	10-May-04/5:12 PM
I really enjoyed this-the rhymes and imagery are effective, good job.
Re: untitled lyric by jsd	10-May-04/5:32 PM
theres some really good stuff here, i think you were able to express your thoughts well, it was a nice read, well done
Re: Its raining by caitydee	10-May-04/9:30 PM
sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!
Re: Desire by mk32	11-May-04/8:17 PM
Some lines were a little awkward but I'm not as into style and grammar as most people on this site are-for me poetry is about expressing what you need to express-I felt and connect with what you were expressing-for that-well done, I enjoyed this.
Re: Pine by andrewjthomas	16-May-04/5:35 PM
I really liked this, it is a bit long, I'm not sure what I would take out. But I have to disagree with the others-I liked the last stanza and I still cared at the end, but I may have drifted a bit in the middle, overall very well done.
Re: sum of squares by nentwined	17-May-04/8:40 PM
I love this-you have read my mind. Good job.