poemranker ::20 most recent comments by caitydee (21-40)

Comments bycaitydee, 21–40 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 10 May 2004, 5:12 PM
I really enjoyed this-the rhymes and imagery are effective, good job.
on untitled lyric by jsd 10 May 2004, 5:32 PM
theres some really good stuff here, i think you were able to express your thoughts well, it was a nice read, well done
on Its raining by caitydee 10 May 2004, 9:30 PM
sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!
on Desire by mk32 11 May 2004, 8:17 PM
Some lines were a little awkward but I'm not as into style and grammar as most people on this site are-for me poetry is about expressing what you need to express-I felt and connect with what you were expressing-for that-well done, I enjoyed this.
on Pine by andrewjthomas 16 May 2004, 5:35 PM
I really liked this, it is a bit long, I'm not sure what I would take out. But I have to disagree with the others-I liked the last stanza and I still cared at the end, but I may have drifted a bit in the middle, overall very well done.
on sum of squares by nentwined 17 May 2004, 8:40 PM
I love this-you have read my mind. Good job.