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replying on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
19 Apr 2005, 3:02 PM
I used to think that but then I realised I was thinking about 'Stan' and 'my name is' and all his other lyrics were utterly thick.
Eminem is an extraordinarily talented poet. I know it will be considered very uncool for me to say so, but he really is. I don't like rap much, and when he's doing the whole gang bang thing I think it's boring. But some of his lyrics? breathtaking skill with word-smithing.
Possibly the most convincing incentive for me to attend Church and become anorexic. In that order. If the Lord is not proud of you, I would be most terribly surprised. God bless.
You, sir, are the reason I couldn't keep my as yet unbrowned hands from this site.
Why not use punctuation within the lines, since you're using it at the ends? I like "coughed a bastard" and "coughed at amen." But much of this eludes me.
2) Oh, I see. I am supposed to bow down to your comments because you say your are more educated than I am.
6) That's a stupid suggestion because the poem is about what I want it to be about, not what you want it to be about.
Ever considered Polyfilla?
ha!
Oddly enough the big votes here do seem to go with the big words rather than the big attitudes. I liked being shouted at although a couple of the rhymes weren't my cup of tea (although I'm in no position to criticise other peoples' rhymes), 8 from me.
BREAKING NEWS: Complete twat elected pope. God be praised!
Of course, I find no inane or wrong comments in my repitoir, except for a few that were intended as funny. I would appreciate a few examples.
Why not stop banging your head against a brick wall on poemranker.com, and start your own site called angstyteenagerapranker.com. Do you want to be the next Eminem or something?
This one, however, did make me laugh. So you get a 5 for it. You lose marks for it being just a bit too much like 'Stan' by Eminem in terms of the sheer amount of ranting rage. Take it easy.
Actually you can get a 6 for the unexpected Deng Xiaoping reference, although you should capitalise proper nouns.
Fuck not f*ck.
Damien is a fitting name because you are the Antichrist of poetry.
I'm certain he meant it sincerely, because it's an excellent -- and interesting -- anwswer. That's what's intriguing about you: this mixing of comments that are mature, astute, thoughtful with comments that are head-scratchingly inane/bizarre or just plain wrong.
"Can you say something good about anything.
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--yes, and I do.
You wouldn't know anything about it though, because you never bothered to look at anybody's posting history to get an idea of what they were about before you started pissing on them. (Or licking their ass, for that matter, lol. lolololol. lol.)
I will assume tentatively that you mean "Oh, good answer" sincerely. I am content in my menial existance, but find Dovina exciting in the way fantasy is.
It's the trouble with all religion. answers are too easy.
The third stanza relates reincarnation to heaven and ghosts in that it projects life past death, and maybe before birth. I thought it was in interesting comparison, though admitedly not developed in the poem.
Wrong. I said what you made me THINK. I made no assumptions. You, however, have reinforced my opinions that you are just indeed quite insecure. On a second point, I quote THREE of your statements from your poems, from which I assemble a point of view. Not one line only.
What you don't say is whether my opinions of you are accurate. I think most of those who have been on the receiving end to your childish tantrums regarding the marks awarded you would agree with me. What do you think?
ALLOWED, not ALOUD. And even so I don't get your point, are you saying that in some metaphorical sense you are not asking for an opinion on your work?
You also fail to answer the point regarding your (non) use of grammar.
Perhaps the "key that can begin this process" is for you to accept that you could improve your writing, and your response to the comments of others. Especially when said comments are not a direct attack but an honest critique.