Re: a comment on Sandia Plain by Dovina	Dovina 17.255.240.138	22-Jun-05/10:29 AM
The Sandia Plain is a fictitious name for the desert lying west of the Sandia Mountains in New Mexico, east of the Rio Grande.
Re: a comment on Arson by Roisin	Roisin 80.3.64.12	22-Jun-05/10:10 AM
I disagree. The poem is concerned with separation and the division of two people who have become co-dependent. Your variation destroys this meaning but it would work well as a sacreligious and egotistical defamation of another artists expression. I give it a 2 (fingers up)
Re: Eternal Pain by lil_evil_boi	Bluemonkey 170.141.68.99	22-Jun-05/8:52 AM
Assignment: Read this to whoever it's for. If you get all the way through it without them A) Shooting themselves or B) shooting you, I'll give you a 10.
Re: Mountain Gorillas by Blue Magpie	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	22-Jun-05/3:47 AM
Not fond of bio-poems. The movies about Fossey and Alfred Kinsey painted far too saintlike portrets of these two legends. Of Fossey is said that she was a most unpleasant, ruthless women who preferred gorilla's over people. Well, can't blame her do we? Nevertheless I wished you had done this less as a Who's who bio.
Re: Sandia Plain by Dovina	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	22-Jun-05/3:25 AM
A bit too detailed, almost reads like a scene from a National Geographic docu. One 'adobe' too many, look for a synonym
Re: After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	22-Jun-05/3:15 AM
I love the dots.. The dots are so poetic... Especially where there's only two of them.... They resemble nipples.....but arty, arty ones...... My tongue glides over the monitorscreen, licking them, slobbering...... I get poetically so aroused by those introspectic, melancholic, punct-colic dots.......and hey, thanks for the knives cutting into a heart, been searching for an equal brilliant metaphore for years and years........
Re: Mountain Gorillas by Blue Magpie	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 71.129.152.219	22-Jun-05/12:42 AM
you think the gorillas think about our inner struggle as higher primates? you think the gorillas see their imminent extinction and wonder about the cause of it? I disagree with your heart, but I don't dislike your sonnet.
Re: Sandia Plain by Dovina	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 71.129.152.219	22-Jun-05/12:37 AM
are you talking about the Sandia near the Rio Grande? What you have written makes me wonder about the author and not about the poem itself. Does that make it art? I don't know. I'm trying to figure out your motivation without knowing you. This is a lot of NOT thinking about the above words.
Re: After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn	Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 71.129.152.219	22-Jun-05/12:29 AM
a scar can not by definition be invisible. Or it isn't a scar. it's unmarred flesh. What makes a scar a scar is the Marring. all that to wonder out loud; is English your first language?
Re: a comment on Slam. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	21-Jun-05/11:25 PM
Harsh. but at least you expressed your opinion. on second thought. if he deserves a zero I’ll gladly give him one. but not out of spite. if he want’s to give “0’s” and giggle behind his screen. I could care less.
Re: Slam. by darby pyn	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.76	21-Jun-05/10:27 PM
I do not think rockmage is limiting himself really, on the 12 of June he rated all the poems I had then posted, one recieved a three, the others were all zeros and ones. I think he is probably going through an insecurity problem so I shall not join the dance, it would not help I believe. Nevertheless, if I were the type who dished out zeros this might well be a candidate for one.
Re: Arson by Roisin	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.76	21-Jun-05/10:17 PM
No bad, a little work, and the addition of a few small words could make it better.
Re: Eternal Pain by lil_evil_boi	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.76	21-Jun-05/10:00 PM
Why do I feel like I have read it a thousand times before??
Re: After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn	Blue Magpie 212.205.251.76	21-Jun-05/9:57 PM
This is too long for what it has to say.
Re: a comment on Slam. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	21-Jun-05/8:13 PM
Agreed.
Re: Today is very far away from a good day by Prince of Void	Joshua_Tree 68.230.105.101	21-Jun-05/7:21 PM
Worth a 4. Giving you an 8 to balance out a certain putz who votes 0 for all poems posted by those who aren't among his chronies. Click on "view voting details" and taking whatever action you deem appropriate.
Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic	Dovina 69.175.32.185	21-Jun-05/7:20 PM
Much better. I wonder why just some of the sentences begin with capitals.
Re: Slam. by darby pyn	Joshua_Tree 68.230.105.101	21-Jun-05/7:08 PM
Before you get too upset about someone voting you a "0," look at who it is. This system is subject to a few abuses and it appears that you and I are rockmage's victims. I urge you to join me in returning the favor.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	pinay_miss_azn 69.143.184.30	21-Jun-05/6:51 PM
nice, very nice. :)
Re: Today is very far away from a good day by Prince of Void	Dental Panic 84.31.86.195	21-Jun-05/2:42 PM
better go easy on the tears.