Re: Drying, Cracked Roots by AnotherNothing	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:43 PM
The middle got a little loose, but this is cool...I get the thought. Fruitless places, things, people...things stagnant... resignation. I wish this would have been as good as the thought that started it...I would guess you didn't get it on paper as quick as it came to your mind. Gave you a decent score anyway!
Re: To Those Who Have Died Today by AnotherNothing	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:34 PM
Typo> I will never know you name (your)...other than that...I really like this...
Re: untitled by venusdemilo	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:32 PM
typo> exist not exsist...other than that, I thought I wasn't going to like this, but then it sorta grew on me. I am not sure where the 'poured' and 'prepared' came into the picture, as that seems to be about cooking...but the rest I get, and haven't seen it said like that. original.
Re: I wish I had a friend by un_oying	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:29 PM
oh, dang...it was going along so well, and then the last four lines..ugh! also, >"It’s to bad I can’t think", should be TOO. I would be perfectly happy if you just dropped the last four lines...then I could give you a decent score...either that, or do something else with the ending.
Re: where to go by AskittlesK	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:25 PM
Wow, this is wild...I like the night, the dark, the moon...I like the wildness of night breezes, and shifting clouds. But I suspect you speak of another kind of darkness, here. Yes, the sun...they say it is nearly as affective as meds, for depression. I love the ending line. Abrupt. nice job.
Re: glimpses by nentwined	LilMsLadyPoet 64.12.116.135	11-Jul-05/9:21 PM
oh, man...sheesh...okay...yeah...got me in the gut....Very good...very good indeed. First read tonight..sheesh.
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	11-Jul-05/7:58 PM
no prob, I do that half the time.
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	11-Jul-05/7:57 PM
interesting. I missed it. now reading it back I don't know what I saw. I still like it.
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	11-Jul-05/7:50 PM
Maybe there is a world where all is wonderful. She sees this world that way, and to her, it is.
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	11-Jul-05/7:46 PM
What's it about. since I got it wrong.
Re: a.m. by oneglove	Lenore 64.252.109.151	11-Jul-05/7:41 PM
Shades of Freddy Krueger
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.185	11-Jul-05/7:40 PM
Thanks for clearing that up.
Re: a comment on Happy Charlene by Dovina	Lenore 64.252.109.151	11-Jul-05/7:35 PM
Read it again. It isn’t positive. It’s depressing as all hell.
Re: a comment on Damned by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	11-Jul-05/7:04 PM
it can be. but being you are the person who causes that finality. and not just getting satisfaction by looking he needs to do you can't have one without the other. my opinion only.
Re: Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:57 PM
I decided to become the anti-cockphage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site. But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
Re: a.m. by oneglove	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:55 PM
I have decided to become the anti-cockmage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site. But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.22.44	11-Jul-05/5:52 PM
After reading the first line, I though 'ugh'. Not a good start, almost made me run. I am glad I didn't because the rest is clever and serrated. I wanna be sedated.
Re: Happy Charlene by Dovina	darby pyn 207.200.116.130	11-Jul-05/3:53 PM
nice positive emotions. a good read.
Re: a comment on Flies in the ointment. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	11-Jul-05/3:41 PM
sorry it confused you. it was not my intention to be vague.
Re: a comment on Flies in the ointment. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	11-Jul-05/3:39 PM
OK. discarded plankton. microscopic food for fish. discarded to emphasize the lack of care for. head held down in a permanent slouch. it suggest the ambiguous response to the question asked. thanks for the questions. hope it explains what I meant.