Re: In My Words by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 81.135.219.214	3-Aug-05/5:23 PM
Oh yes, a new creation after so much time!
Re: a comment on Drops of Pain by PoeticOne	PoeticOne 24.43.122.90	3-Aug-05/4:29 PM
lol... oh thanks :P
Re: untitled by AaronJKeating	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:43 PM
YES!!!
Re: On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:38 PM
I think limerick,s are funny and yours are fun...wtg :)
Re: No More Tomorrows by PoeticOne	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:28 PM
This is good...hmmmm sadness,hurt,pain,lost love...yup...all the right ingredients to make me feel this poem... :)
Re: Drops of Pain by PoeticOne	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:24 PM
The only thing I have to offer for a comment is...I have chocolate..and am willing to share... :)
Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:16 PM
Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:09 PM
Yes I did enjoy this one, I wrote it in about 5 minutes...I woke one morning sitting upside down I believe...hehaha! Thank you
Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:07 PM
mornin Mr.T hehehaha!
Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:03 PM
Thankyou for your great comments :)
Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.155	3-Aug-05/3:01 PM
Why thankyou Mr.T
Re: War by zodiac	MacFrantic 207.200.116.65	3-Aug-05/2:57 PM
The title is strategically bland and I love the broken sentence structure. Always a fan of form. *10*
Re: a comment on Floss by jauser	MacFrantic 207.200.116.132	3-Aug-05/2:41 PM
Thanks much. Finally!
Re: a comment on On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 207.200.116.132	3-Aug-05/2:39 PM
It's, "as WELL as you write". Besides, I do comment as well as I farking write-if not better.
Re: Vain Moment by Bethy	PoeticOne 24.43.122.90	3-Aug-05/1:52 PM
I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!
Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp	PoeticOne 24.43.122.90	3-Aug-05/1:50 PM
It was ok... but its different, as in unique!
Re: Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	PoeticOne 24.43.122.90	3-Aug-05/1:48 PM
I like the flow of it, great wording too! Good Job!
Re: untitled by AaronJKeating	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	3-Aug-05/1:46 PM
Funly!
Re: Floss by jauser	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	3-Aug-05/1:34 PM
"Defeat is not the end, sure w/e, farking great" <~ Outsider art
Re: Vain Moment by Bethy	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	3-Aug-05/1:31 PM
morning Picaso++