| Re: i was an ass by hendrimike |
Bethy 24.222.32.230 |
25-Aug-05/1:15 PM |
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one nighters look just like that...lol :) Bethy
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| Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego |
Bethy 24.222.32.230 |
25-Aug-05/1:13 PM |
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I have said it a thousands times...Life is the longest thing we have! good poem...:) Bethy
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| Re: untitled by LatinQueen |
bellafuego 199.77.249.2 |
25-Aug-05/11:33 AM |
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i think mariah's verse is "we can make a million promises"
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| Re: i was an ass by hendrimike |
bellafuego 199.77.249.2 |
25-Aug-05/10:59 AM |
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wow that's the kind of one night stand you can see on an abc drama.
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| Re: a comment on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138 |
25-Aug-05/10:32 AM |
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Thanks. I went through this about five times trying to get 8 syllables per line. I gave up and let my "ear" tell me what to do. I've wondered about a short caesura in that last line and I had a comma in it. You might be right.
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| Re: a comment on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
25-Aug-05/10:25 AM |
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| Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
25-Aug-05/10:25 AM |
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The last line might need an extra syllable I'm not sure but try sounding it out with "mankind's tide".
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| Re: a comment on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
25-Aug-05/10:02 AM |
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| Re: Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
ALChemy 65.188.89.69 |
25-Aug-05/10:00 AM |
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My dear it's merely a matter of T's and Dâs.
You can choose to be chaste
or choose to be chased
but rarely is a woman both of these
for most men are lead from their waist.
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| Re: UNTITLED by deuce0420 |
bellafuego 199.77.249.2 |
25-Aug-05/9:49 AM |
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| Re: My question is...... by Annie |
Sasha 68.49.8.49 |
25-Aug-05/9:36 AM |
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This poem doesen't tell me anything besides what I've heard a thousand times. If you must do so, and it's okay if you do, then please, please use less outworn language. "Savior" for example needn't be here. You repeat yourself over and over and over. Say something more!!!
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| Re: a comment on Salvatore Quasimodo: Agrigentum Road by Sasha |
Sasha 68.49.8.49 |
25-Aug-05/9:27 AM |
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You can, just re-vote and your last vote is retracted
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| Re: With You at an Ancient Temple by Sasha |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69 |
25-Aug-05/8:56 AM |
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I read this several times to be sure I got the most out of it. Thank you for your time, Sasha.
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| Re: My question is...... by Annie |
Bethy 24.222.32.239 |
25-Aug-05/4:56 AM |
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circle of life...wish we could do something about it...it is a sad life at times...and it is also a joyous one too...good poem...:)Bethy
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| Re: untitled by LatinQueen |
Bethy 24.222.32.239 |
25-Aug-05/4:52 AM |
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simply said...good poem...:)Bethy *8*
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| Re: My question is...... by Annie |
LatinQueen 70.50.105.127 |
25-Aug-05/12:30 AM |
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Reading this, has made me realized that its sooo true..where is that mudda..anywho, i give this a ten and 3 quarters..muhahah
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| Re: a comment on Quietus Proprietus by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.28.255 |
24-Aug-05/9:15 PM |
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And your classy-dressed superwoman was probably run down because some guy twisted his neck.
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| Re: a comment on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.28.255 |
24-Aug-05/9:12 PM |
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Hey, that's great. How about a spaghetti-strap top with a crinkle-skirt, just below the knee, so popular in Paris these days?
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| Re: a comment on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.28.255 |
24-Aug-05/9:09 PM |
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Who cares what he thinks? Who cares what he thinks!!!? Are you not listening to all the times I've harped at you? I care! You man, you. Oh, I see, you're one of those guy who says he looks past the clothes, so they don't matter. Well, at least allow me the fantasy.
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| Re: Art serves a Purpose by i_am_the_popsicle |
Bethy 24.222.32.240 |
24-Aug-05/3:42 PM |
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