Re: Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	Bethy 24.222.32.236	29-Aug-05/11:12 AM
Ahhh...is that what it looks like in there...excellent...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:43 AM
love your ideas...I will edit and re-post...I actually hit his car with the carton...lol...and thanks...I am glad you like it...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:36 AM
Thanks...glad you like it...it was fun to write...will be making a few changes, including yours...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	29-Aug-05/10:35 AM
Do you accept that Gold has a divine Splendour?
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:33 AM
Darkangel...I went to reply to your comments and deleted it...ARG!!!...anyhow...thanks for your comments...my mouse is now a UFO...hehehe...:)Bethy
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:28 AM
it sure does...thanks for your comments...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:26 AM
it sure does...and thanks for your comments...got a few changes to make...and will be re-posting...tell me what ya think...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on Jack by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	29-Aug-05/10:25 AM
pun n. A play on words, sometimes on different senses of the same word and sometimes on the similar sense or sound of different words.
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:23 AM
incerting head in bag now... lol...hiccups will vanish before yer eyes...lol...and thanks...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Moment of Over by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.212	29-Aug-05/10:20 AM
Thanks a whole bunch Dovina, I agree, those few lines do stand out don't they...Alchemy suggested a few changes..I really like them...and will edit and re-post...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	Dovina 12.72.23.7	29-Aug-05/6:02 AM
I, in fact, do choose gold for the reasons you mention and for others that I could add. That is not the point of disagreement.
Re: a comment on Jack by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.23.7	29-Aug-05/5:59 AM
Good call on the last line. It should be, “creator of places to dwell in.” Jack is none of the above. Thanks.
Re: Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	29-Aug-05/5:51 AM
Ha! Universe inside the mind ! Love it !
Re: a comment on Jack by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Aug-05/5:04 AM
A breach is a gap, tear or hole. A breech is the buttocks. I can't speak for Dovina on this but I think she'd rather have Jack working on her breach and not her breech. But then again...
Re: Jack by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Aug-05/4:56 AM
I think a period after "snowflake" and losing the comma after "warm" and "returned" might clarify things. Is the last line missing a word or maybe "ed" at the end of "dwell". It's a good little love poem. Jack is either a rebound lover or Jack Frost? Hell Jack could even be the dog. But if you were to tell me that Jack was the name of your vibrator I'd piss my pants laughing and proclaim you super-genius.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	29-Aug-05/4:35 AM
But the astronomers (many of whom were blasphemers, by the way) did not say "I'm going to look for a new thing called a star today" before looking up at the sky and finding something they called a star. They just looked up, discovered some phenomena, and gave them names AFTER their discovery. But you were giving your phenomenon a name before you even knew what it was. You called it God. Well, suppose you looked up at the sky and saw a star. Would you think you had found God? No. What if you saw a man with a giant beard and sandals? Yes. He's God. So if you're saying, as you did say, that we must find and define God, you must already have some definition of God before you begin your quest. I therefore accept your clarification that you need at least some partial definition before beginning the search for Jesus. I'm touched that you've found some good points about The Splendour Of Gold. Throughout history, man has burrowed for Gold. This has led me to believe that Jesus also spent much of His time living in a burrow. A great number of early christian doctrines actually held that Jesus inhabited an elaborate warren complex near Nazareth, but these were later superseded by more romantic depictions of Christ's life. I think it's shameful the way man pollutes historical texts with his own views on what constitutes Glory or Holiness. Finally, regarding your assertion that God doesn't need to transmit is communications from Heaven, via Space, then down onto planet Earth, I will refer you to the first two lines of the Lord's Prayer: "Our Father, Who art in Heaven," Now why would the prayer say our Father was in Heaven, if he was actually somewhere else, or everywhere else? He's obviously not in Hell. He isn't in unclean places, like slop buckets, or cesspits. There may be spiritual nodes situated within every living cell (excluding bacteria), or every clean spirit, but these nodes are far from autonomous, and must establish a connection to the Primary Hub in Heaven, mediated by some form of radiation owing to the physical constraints imposed by the vacuum of Space.
Re: 8/29 by cronus	Sasha 68.49.8.49	29-Aug-05/2:54 AM
Points for sincerity and novelty. Minus for the i and for not going anywhere with the idea.
Re: Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Aug-05/2:53 AM
A Psalm and a Sonnet. Unique. Although I can't see how this supposed psalm praises god. Nice trans. though.
Re: Emily Gray by Enkidu	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Aug-05/2:41 AM
Don't use "hath" in this poem. The rest sounds good.
Re: a comment on The Trees in Spring (edit) by Sasha	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	29-Aug-05/2:21 AM
The rest sounds top notch.