Re: Fuck stupid chemistry labs by jauser	T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.91.255	20-Jun-08/11:11 AM
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Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	12-Jun-08/8:58 AM
How dare you bring the engine of my verse, That rhymes with shepherd's purse. I would be nothing without the aid of the 'zone, And a truncated cone.
Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 87.84.68.242	11-Jun-08/8:00 AM
....Your words hurt me... Would a dunce have rhymed "cloister" with "moister", or "tune" with "prune"? Yes, yes, I suppose he would. But he would not have rhymed "scene" with "thee", or "sun" with "shone", or "can" with "land". Those are not dunce rhymes, as witnessed by their absence from http://rhymezone.com You should be ashamed of yourself, Stephen. Partly for your cruelty towards others, but mainly for your horrid physical appearance.
Re: Daddy works at the Bank by Skamper	malpaso 70.233.172.172	10-Jun-08/7:38 PM
man, that's gross....I love it!!!!!
Re: sperladnik by malpaso	malpaso 70.233.172.172	10-Jun-08/7:30 PM
no one dares comment on the dreaded sperladnik...like the Inquisition, no one expects it.....mmmmbwaaahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
Re: The Testimonial to my life by Prince of Void	SupremeDreamer 76.254.25.244	6-Jun-08/1:34 PM
Can you make all that interesting and cut the self-pity by 80%? If so, perhaps a decent poem coming out of this just might be possible. Zero.
Re: You say goodbye by winniss	SupremeDreamer 76.254.25.244	6-Jun-08/1:29 PM
What quotebook did you steal that from? Zero.
Re: my love life by mystic enoch	SupremeDreamer 76.254.25.244	6-Jun-08/1:28 PM
Stop whimpering and LIVE. Go manifest destiny motherfucker. Who knows, it might inspire you to write something other than this dribble. Zero.
Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar	impert&ent 82.46.129.169	6-Jun-08/2:54 AM
in-sense?
Re: Over the Horizon by Miggy	Prince of Void 77.237.65.172	5-Jun-08/1:40 PM
Over the horizon still some hopes will be found but at the end of the horizon will sink in darkness until dawn over the horizon slowly breaking into the far distance it finds the way to lit my heart again fill me light but soon the light's getting dark it starts all over again ..this is transient hope over the horizon ..I see things in my own poin of view ...urs are good too I like it ...thanx dude
Re: The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 90.201.195.61	4-Jun-08/12:28 PM
Right, either age has wittled the Angel's skill to the crusty husk of a brittle old flange or the original angel handed over their details to a new angel who is simply dunce. -=10=-
Re: a comment on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 68.124.137.104	31-May-08/8:49 PM
Hah.
Re: Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer	Dan garcia-Black 69.239.240.37	31-May-08/2:44 PM
Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.
Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:35 PM
incense.
Re: it is my turn this season by daniella	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:33 PM
"and pluck the grapes for to drink my own cup my own handful of cherry red sweet wine." I suggest: and pluck the grapes for my own cup of red sweet wine." Also check punctuation, capitalize the I's, etc. Aside from all that, not bad... Think the title could be better though.
Re: a comment on Unsung American Dream by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:28 PM
And your an ugly lesbian. Everyone has their issues. :P
Re: sperladnik by malpaso	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:26 PM
um... Genius? I'm not sure. No vote at this time.
Re: Fuck stupid chemistry labs by jauser	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	31-May-08/1:25 PM
Chemistry is cool when you learn it on your own... bathtub intoxicants are the cure for a dull soul!!!
Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:33 PM
Oh, Btw FAGGOT: Your no longer on the best list. ;) Fucking loser.
Re: In All My Dreams by forsaken	SupremeDreamer 69.236.69.24	30-May-08/12:24 PM
swollow - SWALLOW....FUCK MAN. Can't you fucking use spellcheck.net? Your writing is fucking gay... even gayer is that you just vote for yourself... you know what? Zero bomb time. I've just fucking had it with morons like you.