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The Testimonial to my life (Free verse) by Prince of Void
All my eyes are closed
I'm dreamless in vain
Nowhere just hell can be
I'm living in pains
If I describe
It won't help
That only lasts here in my tears
People left me in my emptiness
And loneliness has been tearing my heart
Days and years started to be meaningless
Everything got me in this vale of tears
All senses imply frustration
This is because of the way people understand
And judge things that make what I'm saying
How they ruined my life because of their own interests
Here I'm lost in very despairs of mine
The future is bleak and dark
What could I Say to redeem myself and other?
When all reasons turned in nothingness
I doubt that I will be understood
Even by words I put in this blank page of my destiny
Everything I hoped that's gone
I tried hard but failed
It seems this has to be in this way
I'm holding a little faith inside
Then that will die within me
Soon or latter I'll be buried
None of you stop living your lives
You still think you'd better think other issues
That's way the world works
People just care what things are concerned to them
Not pointless statement of a dying man
Maybe I'm what you can see thorough this
You just matter how you value words and lines
Those things are nothing without us
You still care a lot
Until you find out that was nothing
Just a funeral and one moment to realize how
We think it was wrong
You give me a zero..
That's your justification to all my agonies
You prove it that I did nothing
To make you even feel a little about the man
he is hopeless and enchanted in hell
No one is out for him
No one loves him even for second
He lived for nothing
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11541
Posted: June 5, 2008 1:27 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2008 1:27 PM PDT
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Zero.