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The Testimonial to my life (Free verse) by Prince of Void

All my eyes are closed I'm dreamless in vain Nowhere just hell can be I'm living in pains If I describe It won't help That only lasts here in my tears People left me in my emptiness And loneliness has been tearing my heart Days and years started to be meaningless Everything got me in this vale of tears All senses imply frustration This is because of the way people understand And judge things that make what I'm saying How they ruined my life because of their own interests Here I'm lost in very despairs of mine The future is bleak and dark What could I Say to redeem myself and other? When all reasons turned in nothingness I doubt that I will be understood Even by words I put in this blank page of my destiny Everything I hoped that's gone I tried hard but failed It seems this has to be in this way I'm holding a little faith inside Then that will die within me Soon or latter I'll be buried None of you stop living your lives You still think you'd better think other issues That's way the world works People just care what things are concerned to them Not pointless statement of a dying man Maybe I'm what you can see thorough this You just matter how you value words and lines Those things are nothing without us You still care a lot Until you find out that was nothing Just a funeral and one moment to realize how We think it was wrong You give me a zero.. That's your justification to all my agonies You prove it that I did nothing To make you even feel a little about the man he is hopeless and enchanted in hell No one is out for him No one loves him even for second He lived for nothing

SupremeDreamer 6-Jun-08/1:34 PM
Can you make all that interesting and cut the self-pity by 80%? If so, perhaps a decent poem coming out of this just might be possible.

Zero.




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