| Re: Gerry's Song by ALChemy |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/5:03 PM |
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I say this only because poemranker has corrupted me: "Sounds gay."
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| Re: a comment on Love letter by zodiac |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/5:00 PM |
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A jingle has rhythm, usually rhyme, and carries a simple theme. A love letter conveys affection. This carries: don't shake the baby???
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| Re: a comment on Love letter by zodiac |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/4:54 PM |
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Permit yourself to do such a dasterdly act only if you wish boycot. If you want to get rid of a scroungy poem because I made you feel bad about it, then please delete it. If you want to post a new poem, then post it. It's not like you post every two days and need to squeeze another in edgewise. Gees!
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| Re: a comment on Submission by Dovina |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/4:48 PM |
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Hardly, would I write about less than importance.
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| Re: a comment on Submission by Dovina |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/4:45 PM |
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You speak, no doubt, of a super man, whom women long for, gush on, then nurse in his paralyzed state til death do us part. Thank you, but your basic binary man, enhanced with compassionate software, outperforms in the end.
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| Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/4:34 PM |
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Yes. And please read my answer carefully, paying particular attention to the question.
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| Re: a comment on The Gate of Heaven by TLRufener |
Dovina 69.225.179.162 |
18-Nov-05/4:26 PM |
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I'd hate to give a long thoughtful reply here where Dancing Shamrock will likely soon delete it. I love when you say, "You'll probably answer . . ." because I can usually do just that and fully justify it by one of the various twists offered. But in this case you do not understand bnecause you are not bound by reason.
I would not trust a man so arogant as to say he trumps. Such a man has not learned the contentment of not knowing. - Dovina
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| Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/3:30 PM |
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Considering the varying results, it made for a worthwhile experiment. I'd give it a 1 or 10 depending on my mood. Right now I'm kinda numb so no vote yet.
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| Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined |
nentwined 64.60.192.131 |
18-Nov-05/11:26 AM |
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I'd probably give it a five or a six. Cute gimmick.
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/11:19 AM |
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I'd like to know what you honestly think of your poem.
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| Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined |
nentwined 64.60.192.131 |
18-Nov-05/11:00 AM |
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I think a poem has to stand on its up-front understandability, so for the purposes of rating it--if you don't understand it, trash it. That's honest. That's how much value the poem has _for you_.
But just to satisfy any curiousity you might have, read it as morse code.
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| Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined |
nentwined 64.60.192.131 |
18-Nov-05/10:52 AM |
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cursed, I tell you--cursed!
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| Re: Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/10:35 AM |
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You probably won't see this but this is like a blend of two of my favorite poets. E.A. Poe and Benny Hill.
Kilkenny? Southpark?
The poem's a classic or should be.
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| Re: Blackout, Amman, November, 2005 by zodiac |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/10:08 AM |
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First: Does that ability to echoe word sounds, not rhyme but echoe certain qualities in words together come naturally or is it more of a hair pulling event.
Because this one comes out so damn natural.
Second: Love how you snuck "bore" in.
Third: I bet you're leaning towards the bug being Jesus. I was.
Forth: There's a current political spin to this one, intended or not.
I could spend all day peeling back layers of this poem.
A sign of a great artwork. You really shouldn't give some of these away for free.
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| Re: a comment on Love letter by zodiac |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/9:15 AM |
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And if you could, seeing christmas is near, throw me another story or two. Hap is a hero deserving of a sequel.
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| Re: a comment on Love letter by zodiac |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
18-Nov-05/9:04 AM |
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| Re: a comment on dit da haiku by nentwined |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
18-Nov-05/9:02 AM |
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This, unsurprisingly, is exactly what everyone always says about nentwined. That's his gift and curse.
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| Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
18-Nov-05/9:01 AM |
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Do you believe God wrote, inspired, or otherwise approves of the content of the Bible? Please don't parp. Answer yes or no.
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| Re: a comment on Bread and blackthorns by Caducus |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
18-Nov-05/8:59 AM |
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Do you remember a recent exchange about "labelling" or are you somehow unhinged?
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| Re: a comment on Love letter by zodiac |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
18-Nov-05/8:59 AM |
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The hidden part was that I was wondering if she was pregnent and if so it sounds like it's almost birthday time. If not I hope you're going to see her soon anyway.
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