Re: Duff firs, Nawal by zodiac	cyan9 217.40.63.105	5-Dec-05/1:37 AM
What it spears with potency it lacks in elegance.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/10:09 PM
All the more reason to send them a good song.
Re: a comment on Shoebox Thoughts by BrandonW	BrandonW 216.78.49.81	4-Dec-05/9:45 PM
That kinda has 18 syllables....
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/2:46 PM
Of course I did (and still do on occasion, but I don't think that Bon Jovi could rock his way out of a paper bag these days.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/2:45 PM
It's all Modest Mouse covers, or really interpretations is more the word. PUSA...a band I haven't thought about in a while.
Re: Until the Façade Comes Down by TLRufener	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/2:30 PM
Facade. Nope can't make that little tail thingy appear under my "C".
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/2:26 PM
I just heard some samples. I guess it's all covers. Sounds like acid folk rock with a little Arab infuence. His voice reminds me of Presidents of the United States of America lead singer Chris Ballew.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/2:07 PM
You mean you didn't rock out to "Livin' on a prayer" back in the day? I hope the 9 I gave you helps mend the wound.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/2:06 PM
In an unrelated comment...the new Sun Kil Moon album is amazing.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/1:44 PM
Bon Jovi?! Sir you have wounded me.
Re: a comment on Popular Lovers by wilco	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/1:43 PM
That is most definitely not what I'm doing.
Re: Popular Lovers by wilco	Dovina 17.255.240.138	4-Dec-05/1:42 PM
It seems you're comparing a mill (sawmill, gristmill) to a run down apartment, or vice versa. Other than that confusion, it's cool.
Re: Duff firs, Nawal by zodiac	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/1:35 PM
An excellent post, as usual.
Re: Shoebox Thoughts by BrandonW	Dovina 17.255.240.138	4-Dec-05/1:33 PM
She sat there staring at our old pictures wondering who was living then
Re: Until the Façade Comes Down by TLRufener	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/1:31 PM
First off, don't start a poem with "there are no words" and "there is no way to explain how I feel"....If there's no words and there's no way to explain it why did you write it? Better yet, why am I reading it? This is a love letter, not a poem. It COULD be a poem if you look in there and find the poetry in it.
Re: Another Chapter by TLRufener	wilco 24.92.74.122	4-Dec-05/1:23 PM
Alright, lookit...you've got to get it out of your head that you have to rhyme to make a poem work. You're putting stuff in here just to make it rhyme. You could say this exact same thing with three lines and it would sound more poetic. It's not just horrible bad, but it's just not good either. It doesn't hold my attention, it doesn't make me think, and it doesn't make me think "yeah..I know what she's feeling...I've felt that way".
Re: a comment on Until the Façade Comes Down by TLRufener	TLRufener 68.115.23.42	4-Dec-05/11:13 AM
I read every comment that I receive, and I save the good ones in my "Improvement List" on my computer. I like to read them just to see if my new work fits what I have been asked to do. Sometimes it does fit, sometimes it doesn't.
Re: Duff firs, Nawal by zodiac	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/8:01 AM
That came out so good that now I'm actually kinda frightened of you. I defy John Updike to do something like this. 10+
Re: Shoebox Thoughts by BrandonW	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/7:08 AM
"Grandma it's me, Brandon." "Oh my god! Are you here to rape me? HELP, HELP, RAPE!" "No grandma it's me your grandson Brandon." "Oh god. HELP! Henry, the rapist is trying to rape our grandson!"
Re: Popular Lovers by wilco	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	4-Dec-05/7:01 AM
Send this to Bon Jovi.