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Light within darkness (Free verse) by Caducus My love prayer
left my lifeline
through unholy steeples
to a bitter bloodied orphan.
God is a good listener
his sign language silence
the rain tells me doom
his answer in brail.
Jesus lays buried in me
varnishing my eyes
watching me cry
the way he did for Magdalene.
Our light of life
is in darkness
is in me
God help you all
the way God helped his own.
Up the ladder:
Schoolyard Walls
Down the ladder:
What A Little spark Can Do
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Posted: December 2, 2005 6:32 AM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2005 6:32 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3826 Comments:
"braille", not "brail".
Better than your usual.
It seems most of the times Jesus wept in the bible it was followed by a resurrection. I'm not sure if that's any consolation to you or not but...
http://www.soulfoodministry.org/docs/Jes
nicely meloncholly sentiment, but sadly void of other aspects of poetry (rich language, structure, rhythm, rhyme, assonance...)
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Jesus LIES buried.