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Light within darkness (Free verse) by Caducus
My love prayer left my lifeline through unholy steeples to a bitter bloodied orphan. God is a good listener his sign language silence the rain tells me doom his answer in brail. Jesus lays buried in me varnishing my eyes watching me cry the way he did for Magdalene. Our light of life is in darkness is in me God help you all the way God helped his own.

Up the ladder: When He's In Me
Down the ladder: Eenie Meenie Minie Moe

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3817
Posted: December 2, 2005 6:32 AM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2005 6:32 AM PST
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[9] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 2-Dec-05/10:13 AM | Reply
Could be a Christmas card, a kind of sad beauty.
Jesus LIES buried.
[n/a] Niphredil @ 192.115.60.100 | 3-Dec-05/3:30 AM | Reply
"braille", not "brail".
[8] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 3-Dec-05/6:35 AM | Reply
Better than your usual.
[9] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 3-Dec-05/8:22 AM | Reply
It seems most of the times Jesus wept in the bible it was followed by a resurrection. I'm not sure if that's any consolation to you or not but...
http://www.soulfoodministry.org/docs/JesusWept.htm
[3] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 | 5-Dec-05/1:50 AM | Reply
nicely meloncholly sentiment, but sadly void of other aspects of poetry (rich language, structure, rhythm, rhyme, assonance...)
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