| Re: a comment on Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void |
Prince of Void 213.207.224.156 |
26-Dec-05/12:07 AM |
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I'm gratefull to your comment ..highness ..u're the princess of post-modern poerty.. i wish i was more capable like u .....
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| Re: a comment on Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void |
Prince of Void 213.207.224.156 |
26-Dec-05/12:02 AM |
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some of us're influenced by poerty itself ..but some other arts can infulence a poet to find his own vision within his own path ..
we are all faithful to poerty with our own fashions
if u have ever understand my poems, I'm a god ..
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| Re: The Calling by PoeticXTC |
Dan garcia-Black 209.247.222.45 |
25-Dec-05/1:49 PM |
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They saw his light.
That star; he smiles, heâs going home
Father calls
That star, he smiles, âIâm on my wayâ.
Happy Kwanza
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| Re: Never Let Go Again by TLRufener |
Dan garcia-Black 209.247.222.45 |
25-Dec-05/1:46 PM |
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"When I see you next
I will take you into my arms
And never let go again" kidnap?
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| Re: Broken Bird by Sisterwolf |
Dan garcia-Black 209.247.222.45 |
25-Dec-05/1:42 PM |
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"He taught she is ugly, unworthy, dumb.
Now her feelings of worth are numb." sad
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| Re: Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void |
Dan garcia-Black 209.247.222.45 |
25-Dec-05/1:39 PM |
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"Screams of mans in end of their times" says it all.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
25-Dec-05/11:58 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
25-Dec-05/11:58 AM |
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It's not an argument, it's a gift.
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| Re: The Service by forestchild7 |
rahson_s 24.90.125.117 |
24-Dec-05/5:53 PM |
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| Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone |
veggiegurl 198.68.29.134 |
24-Dec-05/4:27 PM |
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I think this is a very funny poem but not very tasteful at all still funny
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
veggiegurl 198.68.29.134 |
24-Dec-05/4:16 PM |
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ehhh its alright I give it a five :)
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
24-Dec-05/3:49 PM |
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Brodsky, then, did not read, or chose tradition over scripture. The star associated with the Wise Men came when Jesus was about two years old. He was not an infant. The Wise Men found Mary, Joseph and Jesus in a house where the toddler could have been precocious enough to have noticed the star and perceived something about its relivance.
I wish you would try to get these kinds of things straight before using them as arguments.
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| Re: Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
24-Dec-05/2:13 PM |
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A pretty dismal place, this void of yours.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
24-Dec-05/2:09 PM |
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Depicting everybody having a billion dollars is not useful because it is not achievable and does not help anyone come closer to a billion dollars. Depicting racial unity is useful because even slight changes in a few people's attitudes can stimulate spreading and lasting change in society.
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| Re: Apocalypse has come to end by Prince of Void |
zodiac 70.109.2.131 |
24-Dec-05/12:43 PM |
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I started reading this poem "Void has come to void" and replacing all nouns, verbs and adjectives with "void", and found that it was identical to all your other poems. If you have ever read a poem, I'm a cod.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
zodiac 70.109.2.131 |
24-Dec-05/12:23 PM |
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I'm with you, of course. I'm sure Brodsky would say The baby is God, he can perceive whatever the fuck he wants.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
zodiac 70.109.2.131 |
24-Dec-05/12:22 PM |
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Sure, you want to. Everybody wants to. Unfortunately, that's about as useful as depicting everybody having a billion dollars.
Yes, you would think racial harmony has been achieved to a greater extent. You live in Southern California, the most segregated place in America. Seriously.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
24-Dec-05/12:11 PM |
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Thank you, but it's wrong to think a newborn baby could perceive that.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
24-Dec-05/12:09 PM |
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Why, at Christmastime, must you dwell on all the racial wrongs? All I wanted to do is depict racial harmony through the metaphor of a quartet, where all the people, with thier different apprarances and voices, sing in harmony. The Chrismas quartet singing in the winter night is nostalgic, and I wished to link that to the prospect of racial harmony, which, by the way, I think has been achieved to a greater extent than you imply.
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| Re: a comment on Mixed Quartet by Dovina |
zodiac 70.109.2.131 |
24-Dec-05/12:04 PM |
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No, I meant the Brodsky poem as your Christmas gift. I think it's ace.
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