Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/7:23 AM
Ronald MacDonald looks like Mohammed lets kill the hamburger freaks we'll shoot 'em and loot 'em and cut off their heads but who made this ugly connection?
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/7:14 AM
This is the age of the secular, it must instead be MeccaDonald's. I predict a riot (in Beirut).
Re: Hailing Miriam by Ranger	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	9-Feb-06/7:13 AM
It moves along quite swiftly or maybe that's just how I chose to read it(I don't know) but when I read it at that pace I found it quite passionate.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/7:11 AM
http://www.webcom.com/gnosis/naghamm/thunder.html I have no idea about the program, I discovered this during research. It's about the Divine Feminine, so the second stanza in yours reminded me of it. Enjoy!
Re: a comment on Lonely Road by drnick	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/7:06 AM
Yes, give and take here, old fruit. You can only get away with not commenting on others' work if your name is -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. I'm not sure if this poem is metaphorical or if it's a direct description...if it's the former, you need to make it a little clearer for the benefit of morons like myself; if it's the latter, well then it's nicely written but doesn't really elicit any sort of thought from the reader.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	9-Feb-06/7:06 AM
No, but a couple months ago I was scanning through a couple articles and even saw a show on the History Channel-(I think) about the Gnostic Gospels. If you've got a link to that I'd be more than glad to take a look at it though.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/7:05 AM
Yep, think I'll use 'em.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/7:04 AM
Thanks, because noistalgia is hard to transfer.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/7:03 AM
Or tattoo his tunic with a funny-faced Mohammed while he’s facing Mecca on his knees.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	9-Feb-06/7:01 AM
I only meant use the ("") so it looks more intentional and less like you were at a loss for the right words a just stuck a cliche in to get you to the next line. By the way- Love the "gumption" "unction" half rhyme.
Re: The Wish by celticskatermatt1	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/7:01 AM
Line two is a bit forced.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/7:00 AM
Some “good stuff” was handed down to me from my father.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/6:58 AM
In that case, why not polish a Kurd?
Re: Faith on a cross by Caducus	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/6:57 AM
A very angry Cohen. Nice.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/6:57 AM
No, and it seems like such a worthwhile thing to do.
Re: a comment on My Father’s World by Dovina	Dovina 67.72.98.83	9-Feb-06/6:55 AM
The capital “Fire” is just the first word in a quote; no other significance. I debated using quote marks here and around “More than you can shake a stick at.” But since I’m omitting punctuation generally, I didn’t. In a way these lines are better without, because that makes them my words perigenitally transferred. My father didn’t write, and he wouldn’t say a high-falutin word for love nor money. So I’m not convinced that prayers for it really work.
Re: The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/6:50 AM
Wow. Ever read 'The Thunder, Perfect Mind' (from the Gnostic Gospels)?
Re: cryogenicide necrobot by baphomet	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/6:46 AM
Spelling and grammar! It makes it easier to read. I'm not yet sure whether I love or hate the last line...judgement will be suspended.
Re: Moonlight Paradox by Glasseyez	Ranger 62.252.32.15	9-Feb-06/6:43 AM
Abstract, sometimes nonsensical. I love it. Stanza two equals Matrix by Catholic theology. Everything's about balance and the equation. Yes. The answer had better not disappoint.
Re: My Father’s World by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	9-Feb-06/6:35 AM
Proof, if it were needed, that you can't polish a turd.