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The Wish (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
i watched my shadow as the sun was on my back weeping about the girl and the love that i lack i knew i had something, twisting through my mind. i know i should go after her, but what will i find? a broken piece of glass shattered on the floor just waiting with my shadow wishing to love her more.

Down the ladder: Heaven Help Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9948
Posted: February 6, 2006 7:58 PM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2006 7:58 PM PST
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[n/a] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 9-Feb-06/7:01 AM | Reply
Line two is a bit forced.
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