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The Wish (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 i watched my shadow as the sun was on my back
weeping about the girl and the love that i lack
i knew i had something, twisting through my mind.
i know i should go after her, but what will i find?
a broken piece of glass shattered on the floor
just waiting with my shadow wishing to love her more.
Up the ladder:
which girl are you?
Down the ladder:
this is the last
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Posted: February 6, 2006 7:58 PM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2006 7:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8814354 Overall Rank: 9962 Comments:
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9-Feb-06/7:01 AM
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Line two is a bit forced.
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