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Free verse № 138447

The Wish

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Feb 2006 · 1 comment

i watched my shadow as the sun was on my back weeping about the girl and the love that i lack i knew i had something, twisting through my mind. i know i should go after her, but what will i find? a broken piece of glass shattered on the floor just waiting with my shadow wishing to love her more.

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[n/a] Ranger 9-Feb-06/7:01 AM Reply
Line two is a bit forced.