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The Wish (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

i watched my shadow as the sun was on my back weeping about the girl and the love that i lack i knew i had something, twisting through my mind. i know i should go after her, but what will i find? a broken piece of glass shattered on the floor just waiting with my shadow wishing to love her more.

Ranger 9-Feb-06/7:01 AM
Line two is a bit forced.




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