Dovina
replying on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 4:22 PM
Some can, but in some there seems to be a god-shaped hole that nothing else can satisfy, even if doing so passes understanding.
i.e. - "YOU CANNOT DO WITHOUT ME":
You can, it just hurts a little more.
Yet the web becomes thicker and thicker.
A poem.
INSIPID Is this poem or quiz?
Even a black widow is great fun for awhile.
It will drop because she is a smothering psychopath.
Yes you do have mighty wispy ears sir!
Your poems are copyrighted as soon as you put sticky finger to pad.
I see, you are gigantically tasteless and of undetermined sexuality. Thank you for sharing.
INSIPID I'm gigantic, flapping, and of indeterminate sexuality.
You are so kind.
The misspellings and lack of punctuation may be a "style" or a "voice" the writer is trying to convey. I need more input before I judge the poet's spelling and grammar level. -5-
Thanks.
You're two for two.
That was a nice poem ...i like it
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
Prince of Void
replying on Returning what Iâve despaired before by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:44 PM
My childhood has been haunted by the void of illusion and mysterious worlds
i never figure out what it is...
the world i saw it was shapless grey
and people were like that...i know i cant explain
..whatever it's
it's between me and other sides
Prince of Void
replying on Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:40 PM
You are right ..the world lie to me...i start to choose the different path of life ....made my own identity base on my faith and my choise...so it took years i become a mystic ..with hiden power of vision that i got it mysteriously