fevriere
on Forbidden Desires by blackthoughtz1
21 Oct 2004, 5:33 AM
This is a Pimple.
Well, "tokin'" makes a lot more sense. But it rightly rhymes with both "smokin'" and "chokin'", so I'm well satisfied.
Don't give in so easily. He probably meant "tokin'", like what you do to a marijuana cigarette.
Besides, in order to be "quite literally...doing" token, he'd probably have to be participating in some wacky obscure "fad" dance involving lying under-foot, alternated with rolling around in various slots.
I never heard anyone use the word token like that before. I'm glad you feel you can justify everything that's in there - that's the mark of a satisfied poet. You're lucky.
I posted a poem full of grammatical and other errors. Why don't you ever comment on mine?
This poem is just too simple. That's all.
Anybody knows they're not towels. They're tableclothes.
Stop overfilling your comments with ridiculous groundless assumptions. And your poetry is still utterly artless.
Don't change anything.. I think it's already good.
No, you can send it to the email listed on my Poemranker homepage.
I'll answer your question when you finally tell us what that word means.
It's not a riddle really. Have you ever tried to love a factso, instructable, working fool.
Your just to Blobby Arnt you.
I just wanted to make them Blobby.
ps. did you get my blobby e/mail
It's a riddle. Are you a librarian?
You have an impressive resume and vocabulary, Johnny. I suppose that I do appear self-righteous to hypocrites. Anyway, I'm bored by all this blah, blah, blah. Write an article about another lame poet's hair follicles that will be suitable for publication in some "highly respected lit mag." I'll just continue to post here with my opinion of your unimportance and lack of integrity intact.
Dan garcia-Black
Don't be so self-righteous. Everyone knows your true identity. It's Dan Garcia-Black, with a capital G. Why you still bother with this charade, hiding yourself behind an undercapitalised pseudonym is beyond me, though maybe it has something to do with being unable to "hack" even a reasonable conversation, to say nothing of poetry-writing or hiding your somewhat ill-informed and offensive notions on almost any subject.
No, wait. I suppose the appropriate thing to say here is: No, wait. I'm not hiding! To prove it I'll meet you on Santa Monica Pier at high noon - I'll be the one smoking two cigars. I'm registered at the Long Beach Motel Six under the pseudonym "Up Johndike".
Get over yourself. Of course we're all hacks here. Why the hell would anyone else hang out in this dump? The only difference between us is that I have two articles - one on Emily Dickinson fascicles and one on the rhythmickal and syntacktickal structures in oral/street/performance poetry - currently being vetted by respectable lit journals, which of course doesn't mean anything except that I happen to be good at at least one of my jobs, while you're not even a very good shoeshine. Also, you think I looked all these words up in a thesaurus and care whether or not people look things up in thesauri, though I didn't and don't. And I'm not gay but you are.
The "Islam/Western Pragmatism war" is just great, by the way. PS-I teach Adult Islam Retards, not children. PPS-Whatever.