poemranker ::Forbidden Desires by blackthoughtz1

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Free verse № 113977

Forbidden Desires

Member since 2004 · Posted 19 Oct 2004 · 1 comment

From where I wonder, you came I wonder, how do you see what you see, I see someone that I've never seen, but recognize instantly. You are that mental challenge, that basic training of the mind, that game minus the game that the shallow don't recognize at first that solidifies over time. How I yearn to understand you. When you arrive, you are complete. I listen to your words with my ears, as you speak to my soul, captured is my mind preceding and after your story is told. How I yearn to hear your voice. Your touch, the chillfactor, resulting in frostbite of the heart, Forbidden pleasure that pleases with your presence alone. Drowning my diamond at the mere thought of you becoming intact with any part of my southern, internal home, fighting my internal battles, slowly losing my internal wars. How I yearn to feel you. Solid is your physical, unbreakable is your mental, sexy is all that you do to deserve your credentials. A special friend you've come to be, to come to me, understandable, but sad to see, so sad to see that's all you'll be, that's all you'll be, all you'll ever be. . . Oh how I yearn to love you

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[n/a] fevriere 21-Oct-04/5:33 AM Reply
This is a Pimple.