-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 9:01 AM
Do you think it's racist to find some races more attractive than others? I think it is. It's a form of discrimination on the basis of race. In your poeme, you seem to be suggesting that you are unmoved by physical appearance. Is this true? Or is it just that handsomeness holds rather a lowly administrative post in the corridors of your heart? I have to say that physical appearance dominates the truncheon of my heart.
Yes, and I don't pay much attention to most of it. Itâs a word game for a lot of them, devoid of felt life. Itâs encouraging to hear someone say, âLove hard.â
lol. But I knew one who mildly harmed me once.
Your disgusting, no Englisgh gentleman has ever stretched a female, or even mildly harmed her.
Maybe it we sent them some sweet Valentine sentiment it would take the edge off their angst. Maybe they just donât have any love in their lives.
Dovina love hard, and I wish you all the happiness in the world.
You don't have to explain nothing to no one.
What people think and say about you is none of your business.
We must try for patience here. You see, there are folks on this site burdened with notions about race and its affect on intelligence. Theyâre held back from understanding the finer aspects of language, culture and diversity. Now letâs prepare ourselves for a barrage of malarkey about the benefits of being properly born.
You know D. that has nothing to do with it.
They just want to be all up in your business, instead of getting
there own, and then again maybe they are jealous (smile)
Does it make a different's if he's black, orange, red, green, or
blue?
He's still the man she love's
That's your opinion. If you don't want ours, don't post.
Yes, or brown, yellow or white. Hell, he might even be English, but thatâs a stretch.
Yes, that too.
I like the way you attempt to discredit icing or âicing.â
The 'programming as poetry' idea is not original, though I'd be happy to concede you came up with it independently. Of course, (on this site at least,) the craze all began with my long since deleted felching "Trapped in Beige Curtains" - a work of extraordinary stupidity, to which the following extract will no doubt attest:
DO
Draw back the curtains
What do you see?
More beige curtains
LOOP
'Programming' is even a submittable poeme category, these days. So next time you think about having an original idea, for the love of Christ: don't. Thanks.
I like the way you rather icily put quotes around the icing. As if it wasn't really icing, but a thick velveteen coat of smarm.
But can he be black? Can he be black...
A man that would understand what the hell your forever parping on about! For god sake set your sights a little more realistically, try a man who doesn't run away whilst throwing up when you lurch into the room like a floundering minky.
Your Haiku series on current affairs continues to amaze!
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish:
ears in a bridal
party, the synod ejects
equine betrothal.
"lean on the strong things
that marrow"
What the hell does that mean :( -10-
An extraordinarily insightful poeme. Right from the opening couplet:
"There used to be a little fly
Who saw the world through all her eyes"
I knew that whatever followed was destined to be "unbelievably profound." Clearly what the world needs is more flies, more love from above, more presents for Saddam Hussein, and more religion. Especially in the Middle East. Flawless -10-