zodiac
on Pennies by woodstock20000
23 Feb 2005, 3:13 AM
You sure do a lot of grieving for those days. It's kind of sad. -10-
There's a bus that drives around here with "A Horus Production" written on the driversside door and a big Arab smoking handrolled cigarettes driving. As soon as I see it again, I'll get you a picture.
And more respectable too. And you can pronounce it with two syllables.
Yep. Done that. Not bad atol.
Quickly! Spit spot!
Revisiting this, I have to say I think it is brilliant. That last stanza is quite surprising and reveals a lot..,the way the cat is sucked in, in a comparatively short instant...the mushrooms growing at a completetly negligible pace. And it feels so dank.
Anyway, I love it.
The only reason that dovina is defending, is that she is a plagiarist too. She plagiarized me, of all the hacks in the world to choose from.
I doubt she will have the guts to even deny it. Let's see if she tries.
Do you really want that many periods in the last 5 lines?
I kind of like it, against my will.
Layed is awful. I have never even seen "layed" before, not that that makes it awful, hehehehehheehehehehe, hit him with your hardest marshmallow, still laughing at that one.
I think you need a hug.
They're both correct, but "layed" is less ambiguous.
What now you tub of fucking melting sherbert?
Come on, hit me with your hardest marshmallow.
Yes, I dare, now what?
Are you going to try and
say something witty about
your incessant droning
whine for cock and attention,
or just sit there on your fat
fucking ass for another year
or two squelching bad love
poetry about ghetto folk
and blue collar tv sitcom
criteria no one is remotely
interested in, besides you,
and maybe Chrystal lane swift
when she doesn't have a cock in her eye...
Fucking cream puff hacks
Plus, what can I say that Zodiac already hasn't?
Your mediocrity is revolting at best.
Of course they're both correct Dovina is retarded.
Thanks for the comments so far. Actually, "get laid" & "get layed" are both correct: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q =get%20laid
All pennies come from Uranus
And dare to delete and retaliate?
ha haa... Good one
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