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It's a Mammal, Stupid! (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera
Shaky frogs on quaking leaves Stared into the water The snarling bears with gnarly paws Shot a glance as well For there I stood Naked and defenseless However It is a long story And I have school tomorrow
Up the ladder: frustration
Down the ladder: moving away
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5594
Posted: February 21, 2005 3:18 PM PST; Last modified: February 21, 2005 3:18 PM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 12.72.4.46 | 22-Feb-05/2:44 PM | Reply
No excuse. You start well.
[10] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 22-Feb-05/3:10 PM | Reply
ha haa... Good one
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