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The Mushrooms' Song (Lyric) by zodiac
We waited. That mangy cat slouched past,
turned circles on us - shat in the grass
where we waited, rubbing hunched shoulders - were buried-
folk, pod-monsters, kids on streetcorners.
We were beyond caring,
even then, having half forgotten
why we still waited, who always waited
a summer, a rainfall, a cat to turn it. Leaves rotten
in a tree shadow, worth patience. But the cat - he made it
almost to the treeline before the soil
opened, irritably, and swallowed him whole.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.428572
Weighted score: 6.191026
Overall Rank: 998
Posted: November 4, 2004 5:01 AM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2004 5:05 AM PST
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I also think this is great. Mushrooms, reared in so much shit and mulch, waiting and enduring, stoic almost.
Pod-monsters is a highlight