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ReplyTo a comment on The Mushrooms' Song by zodiac.

edpeterson22 Feb 2005

Revisiting this, I have to say I think it is brilliant. That last stanza is quite surprising and reveals a lot..,the way the cat is sucked in, in a comparatively short instant...the mushrooms growing at a completetly negligible pace. And it feels so dank.

Anyway, I love it.