burgerking33
on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Mar 2005, 3:05 PM
hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha
its really sincere, but you need to check over your work for missing words and such before submitting.
Can we have some of you happy athiests speak out in rebuttal?
I liked it better before, but still good.
good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
Do you really need (bread) after "rye" and "possibilities" after infomercial. You did say it's a little poem. Thoughts turn rye is good. Why not infomercials piclke?
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
21 Mar 2005, 1:04 AM
Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be?
<3 Jason
Only because the true kings feel like letting me be.
<3 Jason
i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
It really wasn't written to be novel or new or the next 'howl' so thanks for reading it on its on terms.
No fair. I've currently got 'the best poem' on here but you've got a bajillion in the top 20. I think you're the reigning monarch of poemranker.
Thanks. At least I'm good for writing something.
hey--thanks, really, for all the thoughts on this poem. I posted it in july and kinda forgot about the site--suddenly i'm getting responses about it. I think the poem needs some work, and know it's not The Best Poem Ever, so critical input is appreciated. Plus... i must admit, if it inspires anyone to think about it longer than it takes to read it makes me feel as if I've managed to get SOMEthing across.
Thnx, Autumn. Perfection is a stretch, but so long as u liked it...
"Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right."
Eh. Anonymous gets a lot of poem-lovin, some of it deserved.
only for those who understand taoism, and that number would be 0 (of course.)
thankyou ....... :)
-megan
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Mar 2005, 10:15 AM
Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many.
<3 Jason
thepinkbunnyofdoom
replying on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
20 Mar 2005, 10:08 AM
lol. No, Angels and Demons was a good read but tedious, to pick back up again(It took me a month to sit down and finish it), so I decided against The Da Vinci Code, despite Dan Brown's great crafting of factual fictions.
<3 Jason
But greater pleasure comes when both emotional and sensual desires are tantilized, then fulfilled in both partners.