See Waiting for the worm, By yours truly. You might like it.

You should put a monkey in there, and then laugh at it.

Well, that earns a nine in my book. Nothings better than a nice good edit.

What are you still doing up young lady? If you never did see eye to eye what was the basis of your friendship?

We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature. And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.

I really like the fourth stanza. Please keep that. I'm not sure I'd continue - "I find myself wishing..." But do follow up. Meat and potatoes stuff here.

A pseudo useful anecdote: While at a restaraunt today our server suggested something she really liked and I saw that *glint* in her eyes as she spoke of this entree. It was quite a lusty glint. Suggesting this particular entree might satiate her. It was really quite unnerving. 10. I believe in education.

I don't know french, but I'd say that since the french version end rhymes also, this took a few cups of espresso to complete.

Classic simplicity.

If you wrote the other one about the tequila worm, then, meh, is my feeling. If not, meh anyway. Maybe try one about Goldschlager instead. Goldschlager- Noun. What Goldmember has in his pants.

Your highway was plenty wide, pinballish though. Too bad Jung was working the construction zone and you failed to slow. Poor Carl. 9. For drowning me.

Behold, my new rant of extremely bloated porportions!!!

Blarg.

I could see this on the radio, Not that it's all that great(No offense), but it's better than alot of stuff I hear.

Must've been hard to think up this one.

Personally, I like this a lot better now. Sounds kind of like a Phish song.

all the pain I caused these salty tears make me choke ?? Whats up sexy? Loving you With All my heart?

I speak your name with quivering lips.

I kinda liked it until it started to sound like SupremeDreamer's odd rantings - I think you've taken it up a notch, made the style more polished. Blessed with a nine.

What would we do without you Sasha... Other than what we normally do? That being avoiding Superiffic translations of crap poetry.