Beautiful flow. Nicely done.

I love the rhythm and repitition.

Shut up.

I hear that arthritis is painful.

Not bad sentiment but if you expect me to take the ime to read it, you could at least take the time to proofread and put the correct puncuation in the poem. Is inasmuch a word?

sorry

I've been away from the ranker for a while and now that I've come back, I'm glad to read to pretty good poems. This being one (of not that many actually).

This is one beautiful poem. I like the over all rhyme flow. It swirls through. And the message is clear. I like it. Nicely written.

In all seriousness, I would spend less time worrying if I'd included enough polysyllables and more time fixing hack, overwrought and ungrammatical sentence structures. Like the repeated subjectless past tenses in the first stanza (including bonus mispunctuated last two lines!) Like "from... to" in the second stanza. Like the incomplete present-participled sentence in the third (and, bonus! more incorrect and missing punctuation!!!) Like "saying goodbye... to meet again", which sounds trite AND is hard grammar. Like comma-bound non sequitors throughout. PS-Do you think there are seasons in the afterlife?

I'm with richa. By the time you're vomiting, you're not ashamed of much of anything.

If there is no struggle, there is no progress. WE are all the same.it is only our knowledge and wisdom that separate us.

so, you are saying, "now you copulate in the flame" ?

Hey I like this piece. Is beautiful and flows in good tone.

Oh Jesus that's a pint of poop.

Ha ha ha!!! PRICELESS.

Unreadable.

No, it's not.

Punctuation is not consistent. Capitals at line starts are not consistent. Last line is confusing.

Reminds me of my grandmother when she was living.It gets no better than this, keep up the good work.

Not your best, but not your worst either. I have grown to dislike this style of writing wih his writing scheme....oh well