regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	25-May-05/3:25 PM
Even cutting out the corniest parts didn't help this. GAH!
regarding some deleted poem...	Quarton 12.217.210.219	25-May-05/4:01 PM
This is quite a good read. Well done.
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	Quarton 12.217.210.219	25-May-05/4:06 PM
Quite simply elegant and I don't impress easily. The best I have read at this site.
Re: Crossing the Mojave by INTRANSIT	Quarton 12.217.210.219	25-May-05/4:21 PM
A solid nine. Fascinating!
regarding some deleted poem...	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/4:21 PM
I like it
regarding some deleted poem...	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/4:21 PM
cheered me right up!
Re: The Son Of by malakin	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/4:24 PM
Excellent!I needed to read this today! Thanks
Re: you will feel by nentwined	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/4:24 PM
have a good trip
Re: Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/4:26 PM
nice sentiments..prepsre for bashing comments from others
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.164.242.151	25-May-05/4:39 PM
It would present better if you did not try to get fancy with the spacing. This is not one of your better pieces.
Re: Applicative-Order Fixed-Point Operator by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dan garcia-Black 69.231.117.80	25-May-05/4:44 PM
DAPI you are funny.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 69.231.117.80	25-May-05/4:45 PM
Godswife posts here.
Re: mountain creek by brazen	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:00 PM
good I liked this one
Re: Die tomorrow by little_big_nose	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:01 PM
been there done.... that time to split
Re: The Gravity of Love by april fool	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:04 PM
let us know when you do
regarding some deleted poem...	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:18 PM
thanks for the laugh I needed it and your artwork is beautiful..I'm still mulling over your comments
regarding some deleted poem...	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:21 PM
Hmmm...I decided not to hate you after all...good piece
regarding some deleted poem...	windyone 63.245.189.142	25-May-05/5:29 PM
like father like son :-)
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	25-May-05/5:59 PM
Rockmage, man-with-granite-skull, you still misses the point. A Zero or a Ten is nothing but a figure that states: now this is great, and this one is awful. A poster receives a zero and no comments and hasn't become any wiser. He cannot 'grow' from there because he doesn't know where he went wrong. YOU are not telling him. All he can tell from your zero, is the message 'Fuck off'. Let's talk about me, for a change. A Zero for my amateur-poem 'The secondhand wait'. Granite principles or not, you cannot deny that my story is a par above stupidity, the mood isn't vulgar or carnavalesque, the descriptions and details are not raw and not caricaturistic. Whatever its shortcomings, it's not totally devoid of poetics. Now what your zero could mean, is 'this is trash and not a poem at all'. It could also mean (as you recently explained): 'this is a failed poem but don't let it get you down.' You want, no, you INSIST people to grow and get better. ('It's my duty') At the same time, you, as a poem 'connosseur', refuses to explain to me in what way and where I fucked up my own poem. For some reasons you seem to think that the sheer sight of your zero will prompt me into a state of instant revelation and total insight into my own mistakes and, possibly, potential... You are a remarkable man.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	25-May-05/6:07 PM
It gives for clear reading. I like the form. And the message goes WAY above my head...I vote a 5, which means: 'can't cope'